I'm so glad you're continuing this! I love Jareth's POV in this chapter. The idea that Sarah walks multiple paths and therefore is confused by the concept of having to chose one or the other is really well done and makes for a very interesting premise for how Jareth fell in love with her. I laughed out loud at Jareth's giddy realization that she was going to marry him!

Still loving this story - really one of the best I've come across. :)

I am breathless with joy. This is beautiful. Thank you!

*squee* Sarah's become Queen and I adore Jareth's insight on how one of her greatest gifts it the ability to walk multiple paths. She gets to keep her cake and eat it too. Also, brilliant engagement gift for Jareth.

Oh so wonderful!

Found your authorpage a few weeks back and was hooked by the first chapter of this - then I'm poking around because I lost the link on another one of your stories today and what do I find? A second chapter of "Her Kingdom as Great."

I think half the fun of reading is when I find an author that can craft a scene that just comes alive in my head, and this story is one living shot after another - can I just say Epic Win?

Loved it, and I'll definitely be watching for any other snips that you post for this one.

This has to be one of the most gloriously epic stories I've ever read. From Sarah's evolution from child to queen to Jareth's not-quite-human yet oh so well explained point of view and, of course, Sarah's kingdom, everything is filled with a level of details that make this story more than mere words on (electronic) paper.

Oh, my god! I can't wait for the next installment of this. I love stories where the author takes the time to actually create a world to go along with the plot... It adds another dimension to the story!

When I don't really get the feel of the world, it just seems to me like a painting with no shading or depth. Flat, in other words.

I hope this story gets cont'd soon! :)

Really well done, thank you very, very much!

Wow. That was just, whoa. I loved it. This is probably the best I've read so far. It really seems like the true continuation of the story with all our favorite characters. Please continue this into a series. You could do so well and you are a great contribution to this fandom.

really nice. its clear you thought hard about how to continue jareth and sarah without it being ridiculously one sided. and your description of her kingdom really brought it to life, go you!

This is really quite amazing. I love the world you've built up here, from the levels of goblins to the practically visible image of Sarah's kingdom to minor details like Hoggle's family. I love your explanation of why Sarah couldn't remember a simple line like "You have no power over me." I love your characterizations of both of them as real equals with just as much power over each other as being under each others'. I love Jareth's not-human reactions and the way Sarah's grown-up (probably the most realistic interpretation I've ever read).

I'd love to see a series in this 'verse, but it works very well as a stand-alone. Very well done.

Amazing story. I loved the interaction between Sarah and Jareth.

Well done.

I really liked this! It was interesting, though it did seem a bit rushed at times. I could see how this could have been expanded into several chapters, which would have been nice, but I liked it a lot like this.

You really should consider continuing it. I would be very happy to read more. ;]

-Fab

WONDERFUL! any chance you'll do some offshoots of this story or something? I totally wanna see more of their games against each other...pwease?*big puppy dog eyes*

I loved it! And I hope that the series continues : )