Reviews for Her Kingdom as Great |
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Barranca chapter 1 . 11/9/2008 Nicely rounded short story. I was a bit surprised Sarah is planning on studying politics, but then again when she has decided on something, she'll do anything to achieve it. |
elemental573 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008 Absolutly LOVED it! Definately would love to see this continued. Your vivid descriptions and unique ideas lent themselves wonderfully to the highly captivating dialogue and situations. Please do continue! |
gideons-inamorata chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 This...This was excellent. The world building was unique, and fleshed-out, and everything you could hope for. I would love for this to be more than a oneshot, and I think that it would work out into a beautiful story, but I understand why you chose to keep it here; it is, in its own way, complete in its ambiguity. |
Celecia Leigh chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 Good work. This needs a sequel. |
You-know-who chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 Wow! Very nice! I very much like the maturity of Sarah recognizing her own immaturity, and insisting on the right to grow up, and at her own pace. The irredeemable tragedy that follows from the faeries' bigotry is another good theme. Sarah's mercy at the end softens the tragedy, but in the service of the larger story. There's also a good deal of Amber in Sarah's ability to create a world by envisioning and painting it. Very nicely done. |