Oh my gosh! And update! Loved it! I did notice so e switching between Robert and Richard as the father's name. Either way, it was splendid! Will there be more? This is seriously a favorite story. I have rad and reread I don't know how many times!

Sarah IS Queen
And finally married to her Partner
It is fitting he is also a King.

They got married and lived happily ever after
A traditional ending
Traditional because it is a good ending.

While you have a great story and it is complete, some extra scenes would be nice.
National Intelligence Department, NID, the Air Force is mentioned as well.
Is Sarah involved with Stargate Command?
A few scenes showing Sarah negotiating between the SGC or SG1 and the Tokra might be fun.
First comes love, then comes marriage, now it is time for the baby carriage.
Twins I think, a boy and a girl, one to be future Goblin King, another to be Queen of the N.E.P.
(Near endless plains)

Thanks for your time and effort writing and posting this story.
Please consider adding details to your world.

Hooray an update! I like how you blended in The Ambassador. Were those Tok'ra who attended with the military? Cool!

The world building and Sarah understanding from Karen's point of view really showcases the goals your note indicated. Wonderfully done.

A wonderful addition to a wonderful story. I certainly wasn't expecting more to this story, but this fits in perfectly and gives us a unique perspective on Sarah while also letting us see Sarah and Jareth's wedding.

Wow. I am super excited to read this. I really appreciate how Karen obviously has some ideas about what is going on but nothing definite and is treating it all as confidential. She's not stupid but also is respecting Sarah's separate life. I love how you wrote that relationship. Also hearing about the wedding was lovely. This is one of my favorite fanfiction out of thousands so more of it was so nice to read! Thank you!

This was a seriously awesome story. Thanks for sharing.

Oh. Oh wow. That is just absolutely, wonderfully overwhelming. And I love the mentioned crossovers!
The ambassador is of course obvious, but is Toby actually attending hogwarts? (aaand does that refer to tardisistheonlywaytotravel's I carry the crown?)
Either way, I love it!

Absolutely delightful and so unusual. Really well done. Please consider a sequel. I do love those coats!

*screeching noise* An update! I absolutely loved this fanfiction, rereading it multiple times, and then one day. . . A beautiful update that wrapped up loose ends quite nicely in an interesting third party view. I'm so happy right now. Thank you, and if you ever make a sequel, I would read it.

This is such a cool expansion on this story. Didn’t know how much I needed it until I read it. I have to confess, though. Now I want this same event through SGC’s POV.

I loved what you did with Karen's perspective on event here, especially how she's not the "evil stepmother" but rather someone confused and taken aback by events but trying her best nonetheless. Sarah and Jareth's smug proclamations were also excellently in character.

OH MY! That was a great turning curve!

Wonderful! I loved this perspective, and the sneak peek of later life. Thanks for writing and sharing. :-)

This was a wonderful addition to an already great story. Thank you!