It's still a great story, lovely prose, well written (although it could use a bit tighter proof-reading), but it needs an epilogue or denouement.
It somehow just...stops. It isn't complete.

This is fantastic

I just wanted to thank you for sharing such a lovely work of art. This was simply a joy to read and a pleasure to daydream about. Wishing you the very best in all your endeavors.

Really splendid prose.
Finding something on this site written with care and coherency is a marvel.
Thank you.

I have read and reread this story so many times! Absolutely just love it!

HOLY CRAP THAT WAS FREAKING FANTASTIC. IT WAS SO PERFECT IN EVERY LITTLE DETAIL OMG JUST..WOW WOW WOW OMG I'M BLOWN AWAY BEST LABYRINTH FANFIC I'VE EVER READ

I liked your story, it was good :D

This is without a doubt the greatest Labyrinth fanfic I have ever read! I love how you delved into the more metaphysical and magical aspects of that universe and made it so engaging and entertaining! I'm so glad I found this fic! You're a fantastic writer!

This was lovely. I enjoyed the first chapter so much I was almost afraid to read the second for fear that it wouldn't live up to my expectations. After a little while, I took the chance to hit next and am very glad that I did. I enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWE! That was adorable! *hearts in eyes*
Thank you so much for writing and posting this!
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Update soon ne?!

Wow. Your world building is amazing. And I LOOOOVE your explanation of what Jareth is. I think the whole lesser goblin, goblin, and high goblin makes the most sense out of all the fics I've ever read. He's like a sun, the goblins are stars and the lesser goblins are like little rambunctious plants that live off their light. Soooo cool.

I know this is an old story, but I kind of wish you would add a bit more to it.

I loved this. Thank you for posting.

This is awesome! Please, please continue! I would love to see how the Land of Near Endless Plains evolves! I have so many questions! How will the captured fae evolve? Will Toby inherit? Do the Plains hold any other secrets? Will the Aboveground/human world develop myths about Sarah and her kingdom? I really hope you grace us with another chapter!