What a lovely story! I liked the world building and the characterization. Thank you for sharing!

I've reread this quite a few times, and it remains the best post-labyrinth fic I've found. Very well done.

Ah... apparently when I get excited over stories I flutter... " It is embarrassing to be told that. I also seem to chirp and coo... So, no more reading in public.

This is absolutely gorgeous. The entire story is amazing. Every word and every thought, where some paint upon canvas in shapes and physical manifest, yours is the art loved best by me. It is by far one of the best, if not the best, Labyrinth stories on the site. J’en mettrais ma main au feu. It is a fact.

This story is just so fabulous. I can't even tell you. Too amazing for words.

It is lovable.

this is truly wonderful, in the film i felt that there was so much that could be built upon, this does so in such an interesting and enthralling way. it's just a pity it's so short...

Keep going! It's wonderful and lovely and perfect! Nicely done, I love it!

Gorgeous! Outstanding! Magnificent! Just a few of the many gracious adjectives this story deserves as its descriptors. I adored the detail you put into the text for the process of Sarah painting. And what a fantastic idea that the crystal ballroom is a prison for more than just would-be champions of the Labyrinth! Gah! I love it all! Well done.

This is, hands down, probably the best and most satisfying Labyrinth fanfic I have read as of yet. True to character, exploring further the themes of the initial story in the most incredibly intelligent fashion, and written by someone who understand THAT THERE SHOULD BE NO FLUFF GOING ON IN THAT RELATIONSHIP! Because it is much, MUCH too serious and powerful for fluff.
And humor too!
Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou.

I would still give anything for you to complete this.

Okay, I was a little leary at first...but you have impressed me. This is a wonderfully written story. Great job!

I loved this story so much. I wish you had done more with it

Oh, I love this. And the way the Near Endless Plains appeared was just perfect. Although I'd love to see more in this verse.

Quite possibly the greatest Labyrinth fic I've ever read.

Thank you thank you thank you.
This story is beautiful.
Thank you so much for sharing.