this is lovely but is this all? i feel there is more to be written of this world you have created based on the labyrith.

I first read this story years ago and I'm glad I found it again. Thank you.

That was fantastic. Thank you.

AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW *cries tears of joy*

It was lovely!

This was an absolutely gorgeous piece and one of the better Labyrinth fanfictions i have read since I started in this fandom...(two weeks ago lol). Well Done.

I tried and I tried and I tried to come up with a worthy review, but the only thing ringing through my head is a very satisfied "Wow, that was GOOD." Perfect even. Thank you for writing.

This was wonderful. Thanks for writing it.

This story has reminded me of everything I love about Labyrinth. Thank you. The trickiness and slipperiness that reminds one what is truly meant by the word possibility. The infinite different paths that arise from a single word. The "meta" implications of the absurdity of what we assume is understanding.

This is so good! The story is riveting, glorious and captivating. The possibilities! Wonderful job, I thank you for the experience.

I keep coming back to this fic and loving it :D Must be my fav in this fandom.
I absolutely adore the characterization and the little things like Jareth realising Sarah was planning an "appropriate engagement present" in all her preparations :)

I enjoyed this story (sorry for only reviewing once) so much. Despite the time lapse, you still preserve Sarah's innocence while illustrating her strength so well, and the concept that she flat out lied to Jareth when she made her claim was brilliant- the Labyrinth's reaction to that always seemed a bit much to me, but I really appreciated how you handled it, weaving in so much canon into the story.

Jareth was also portrayed well, attractive and sweet at times, but still very much his arrogant, self-assured, predatory self. Loved it.

Interesting story :)

Hooray! This was a beautiful story, too. A good continuation of the situation established in the first chapter, but also able to stand on its own. And I was glad that Roselynn got to kick her ex's tail!

I admit, I wasn't impressed with the idea given in the summary. But ZOMG! I LOVE this chapter and the angle you took on the Jareth-Sarah relationship!

This was kinda, yeah, well, perfect. A story based off a line, and the way you managed to flesh out the kingdoms and the characters without bogging down the story or making them OOC was lovely.

I think my favorite part was the entire first chapter. I really loved the lovingly detailed description of the land, and Sarah and Jareth's first interactions after some time, and the way that the family manages to move on and reconnect.