Reviews for When the world begins to die
Guest chapter 21 . 4/3
Very intriguing. I sorta enjoy the psychological drama that keeps happening, shows a new side of both Ed and Roy. Keep up the great work!
Alyssa chapter 21 . 8/28/2016
PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS THE BESTEST STORY EVER! ITS SO ADORABLE!
Alyssa chapter 17 . 8/28/2016
OMG LOOOOOOOOVE IT! OTS SO AMAZING! XD
Alyssa chapter 5 . 8/27/2016
I love this story so far!
TheApprentice2014 chapter 21 . 7/21/2016
More please! I'm hooked.
The Flame Alchemist 13 chapter 21 . 7/4/2016
Great chapter! Well done! I loved every word of this chapter! I hope you can update soon. I lone this story!
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Attackoneverything chapter 21 . 7/4/2016
I am loving this!
I can't wait for an update!, XD
This is really good XD
I kinds remeber your story, just read the last chapter as a refresher and I am good to go, memory wise XD
Can't wait for an update! XD
Attackoneverything chapter 20 . 5/17/2016
This is super good!
I hope u update it!
Loveing it!
Belladonna209 chapter 20 . 5/13/2016
dear god, havoc! but a good chapter
The Flame Alchemist 13 chapter 20 . 5/12/2016
Yay! You finally updated! I hope you update again really soon I love this story :D
Yukio Mustang chapter 19 . 3/12/2016
this is such am Adewale series
Yukio Mustang chapter 19 . 3/12/2016
i guess this would be from the 2003 series (or is it 2002 cant remember. i mean the series that isnt brotherhood) since the process of creating a homunculus is different
Guest chapter 18 . 10/28/2015
Updaaaaaaaaateeeeeeeeee I'm going crazy
Guest chapter 18 . 9/20/2015
What Ed mom is alive !
Zangetsu50 chapter 18 . 8/12/2015
Your back! :)
Missed your story so much so it brought me joy to see an update from you!

So my comment to your chapter
OMG WHY IS IT HIS MOM?! WHAT IS GOING ON?

Nice ending after being gone for 3 years :D
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