Reviews for Order's
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12
He orders me to sit. Verb. No apostrophe

He gave me orders. Plural noun. No apostrophe.

Apostrophe for missing letters or possession.
It's it is. They're they are.
Jethro's house. Gibbs's house.
Crazy Ninja chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
great story i quite like this version
but 1 question. How and where did you find out that part about her fiancé
The Lime-Wielding Ninja chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
This was well written. The tenses shifted a bit, but that's the only probalem I could see. Very good.
EmeraldFire512 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
how did you find the part about ziva's fiancee if it was not actually on the show?
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
I can see this happening.

Good one.
Mere-Bear-Maryy chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Wow. Wait what!

Ziva was engaged to an Arms Dealer?


i wish they did put that in Undercover, i would love to see it!

Anyways, great fic.

Love Maryy

tripping on love chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Great oneshot, I like it how you actually gave Ziva's father feelings.

Can I ask about the script, like where you read it?