Reviews for Order's
Crazy Ninja chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
great story i quite like this version
but 1 question. How and where did you find out that part about her fiancé
The Lime-Wielding Ninja chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
This was well written. The tenses shifted a bit, but that's the only probalem I could see. Very good.
EmeraldFire512 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
how did you find the part about ziva's fiancee if it was not actually on the show?
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
I can see this happening.

Good one.
Mere-Bear-Maryy chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Wow. Wait what!

Ziva was engaged to an Arms Dealer?


i wish they did put that in Undercover, i would love to see it!

Anyways, great fic.

Love Maryy

tripping on love chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Great oneshot, I like it how you actually gave Ziva's father feelings.

Can I ask about the script, like where you read it?