|Reviews for The Land of Lightheart|
| godzillafan1 chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
chapters are kind of short but it's still an interesting story wonder what kind of creatures have captured our heroine maybe some underwater version of delvers? well please write the next chapter soon maybe make it longer next time too.
| Angelsrm chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
So... what happened?
| WishDreamer chapter 3 . 3/2/2009
This is so cool! I'm a fan of his, too, and I thought this was amazing. It has very unique ideas, well-paced, and pretty well descripted. You could probably stand to expand on how the reef or coral looks or how the characters are moving or playing. How a horse could trod in water, unless it walked on the sand bed, is a little fuzzy. But I hope you write more! This was amazing
| Car chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
hey "alissa" wassup?