|Reviews for Shadow War|
| Dante Nastaran chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I like the story so far, but you need a beta. You have tons of spelling errors.
P.S. The village is Konoha, no kohona.
Konoha (このは木の葉) means foliage, leaves of trees
| Dante Nastaran chapter 2 . 8/17/2012
I like the story so far but..there are a ton of spelling mistakes & nearly as many grammatical errors as well.
| Leaf Ranger chapter 4 . 1/7/2009
Okay, well, you basically should have the five person squad here try to come up with a plan, that almost works to catch Naruto. Then, Naruto does something that ruins the plan, and the timer ends. Then of course, is the cliche speach about teamwork, and that they pass, if they do use teamwork.
| Leaf Ranger chapter 3 . 1/7/2009
| Leaf Ranger chapter 2 . 1/7/2009
Well, this is interesting so far, but a little confusing, as there is no backround reference. also, you need to catch your spelling.
But this is still interesting.
| piratequeen11 chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
This story is really good! I'm surpised that no one has reviewed it yet! I'll continue reading and maybe latter on I can give you some ideas if you want.