Reviews for The Begining
dawn chase chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
That was great I cried!
SetoJouFan chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
This was an amazing story!

XD I can so picture Cloud as a girl! He(she?) would be hot~

Poor Jenova! She's just a child! But I like how you portrayed her IT actually seems like it could happen in the game...

Wow I love how Seph at the end runs after Cloud (awesome~)
aomoa chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Fantastic fic. It all looed together so well. I do partially wish you did set a solid ending though, because then instead of wondering what happened I would be able to jump for joy or grieve, however I also like the cliffhanger because its suitably...misty? I dunno, I'm not good with words.

Kayzin chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Artscapades chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
I love it! It was really good having the poem at the start and the end and linking everything together. You just need to check some spelling here and there but other than that it's perfect!
luminousSpark chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
I like your writing style. The use of repetitions and short sentences are very effective. You version of the story is very good as well. Love it.
Shiva-IceFlame chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
This was really good. You know, Jenova did act kinda like a child. The same as Gaia. In my mind at least. And I love this idea! Cheers from both of us.

-Shiva Ice.

_Shadow Eclipse
seasnake.756 chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
awesome work. you give it a whole new perspective.
zita chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Interesting ... its very diferrent than the usual au

Pretty cool