Reviews for Nessie'sJourney
Sakure of Snow chapter 22 . 1/4
This was a pretty good first attempt at a story. Very interesting and I loved the journey. The ending was pretty standard and lackluster for me; an ending I've seen many times before. It came off a bit flat for me. But otherwise, I was entertained. Great job.
Ghost-of-fics-passed chapter 15 . 10/15/2011
Jacob can stay away... Lets just kiss Darius some more ;)

Loving the story 3
darkshadownight chapter 19 . 10/17/2009
you should change it to M
prfct-disaster chapter 13 . 7/1/2009
good but i still don't like how hes like all up in Nessies

Space and stuff

but whatever its your story

other than that its absolutly amazing
prfct-disaster chapter 12 . 7/1/2009
I don't like Darius hes kinda talking advantage of Nessie

but shes not stopping him either!

nyways

Amazing Story!

your an amazing writer keep at it!
prfct-disaster chapter 11 . 7/1/2009
Woow...?

uhm

No

Why did she kiss the dude?

why why why?

she with Jacob oh well ill have JACOB!

3
prfct-disaster chapter 10 . 7/1/2009
Your n astonishing Arthur!

its amazing!

so many details!

lovee it!
prfct-disaster chapter 9 . 7/1/2009
Lool weird

amazing!

but NO!

how could she betray

her family

and jacob

by drinking human blood.?
prfct-disaster chapter 8 . 7/1/2009
Amazing!

i actually teared up at the last part

not even joking!

:'(

soo Cutteh!

Lovee it!
prfct-disaster chapter 7 . 7/1/2009
AMAZING!

but how did she know..?

hmm maybe she a full vamp..?

Amazing chapter1

sorry i didnt get to review some of the last chapts. but my internet wasn't working

ill review them soon

3 3 Amazing!
prfct-disaster chapter 4 . 7/1/2009
WTH!

Aroo..?

nyways!

Amazing chapterr!
prfct-disaster chapter 3 . 7/1/2009
AK!

Amazing!

but Stupid

why didnt he kiss her!

ERR!

Amazing!
prfct-disaster chapter 2 . 7/1/2009
OME!

that's AMAZING!

!

AMAZING!
prfct-disaster chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Thats REally Awesome!

keep Writing

i also have a story

about nessie and her

life.

! 3
Beautifully Malicious chapter 22 . 4/10/2009
NO! I wanted her to go with Darius! I hate Jacob, and Darius was perfect for her!NO!
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