|Reviews for Nessie'sJourney|
| Sakure of Snow chapter 22 . 1/4/2015
This was a pretty good first attempt at a story. Very interesting and I loved the journey. The ending was pretty standard and lackluster for me; an ending I've seen many times before. It came off a bit flat for me. But otherwise, I was entertained. Great job.
| Ghost-of-fics-passed chapter 15 . 10/15/2011
Jacob can stay away... Lets just kiss Darius some more ;)
Loving the story 3
| darkshadownight chapter 19 . 10/17/2009
you should change it to M
| prfct-disaster chapter 13 . 7/1/2009
good but i still don't like how hes like all up in Nessies
Space and stuff
but whatever its your story
other than that its absolutly amazing
| prfct-disaster chapter 12 . 7/1/2009
I don't like Darius hes kinda talking advantage of Nessie
but shes not stopping him either!
your an amazing writer keep at it!
| prfct-disaster chapter 11 . 7/1/2009
Why did she kiss the dude?
why why why?
she with Jacob oh well ill have JACOB!
| prfct-disaster chapter 10 . 7/1/2009
Your n astonishing Arthur!
so many details!
| prfct-disaster chapter 9 . 7/1/2009
how could she betray
by drinking human blood.?
| prfct-disaster chapter 8 . 7/1/2009
i actually teared up at the last part
not even joking!
| prfct-disaster chapter 7 . 7/1/2009
but how did she know..?
hmm maybe she a full vamp..?
sorry i didnt get to review some of the last chapts. but my internet wasn't working
ill review them soon
3 3 Amazing!
| prfct-disaster chapter 4 . 7/1/2009
| prfct-disaster chapter 3 . 7/1/2009
why didnt he kiss her!
| prfct-disaster chapter 2 . 7/1/2009
| prfct-disaster chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Thats REally Awesome!
i also have a story
about nessie and her
| Beautifully Malicious chapter 22 . 4/10/2009
NO! I wanted her to go with Darius! I hate Jacob, and Darius was perfect for her!NO!