|Reviews for Things Fall Apart|
| Ashen Author chapter 1 . 10/1
I love the Ozai thing.
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 3 . 6/24
yes Toph the troll.. and as if lying and truths are that easy jsut dont make any declarative statments taht are yes and now and then you wont be SURE.
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 2 . 6/24
yes, that is... yes. funniest as all ... I mean considering he was looking for avatar and spirits acting up isnt a thing that just STOPPED because avatar not only a barly teenager just mutilated by his father in front of everyone.. betrayal and that whole bit... but probabbly REALLY crazy situations as well!
| mary chapter 12 . 6/9
Ewe ewe ok grose! Didn't even finish it.
| mary chapter 5 . 6/9
You my friend, are a genius! This is so funny! I love it!
| kangaroo2010 chapter 12 . 5/18
I just wanted to let you know that I, quite literally, burst into hysterical laughter at this chapter. I mean, all of these were fun, but this one? I just about feel out of my chair.
Best. Crack-Fic. EVER. Seriously.
| Whyhow chapter 10 . 4/29
I tried a few high school AUs of various fandoms when they seemed less romantic, but I always wondered about when the actual high school happened. This one has more holes than most, probably due to putting characters in places where they clearly wouldn't belong.
| Whyhow chapter 9 . 4/29
How did turtle ducks betray him? What did he expect them to do when an unfamiliar and weird-smelling creature walked up to them with unknown intentions? They have those teeth for a reason.
| Whyhow chapter 8 . 4/29
How is it even possible to chant death to the fire nation in iambic pentameter?
| Whyhow chapter 6 . 4/29
Not quite as good as the last couple, but still very funny.
| Whyhow chapter 5 . 4/29
I didn't really like these at first, but each one seems to be better than the previous one.
| Whyhow chapter 3 . 4/29
Most of these aren't that interesting, but I really like this one.
| Hero Of The Hazard chapter 4 . 1/26
[A small, happy smile blossomed on her face.]
The calm before the storm. 0_0
| Hero Of The Hazard chapter 3 . 1/26
[Katara [...] bared her surprisingly sharp, white teeth.]
0_0 *Holy crap, is she a vampire? Scary.*
[to stare at Katara nervously. He backed away slowly.]
Same, Zuko. Same.
[*Zuko nopes out of there*]
LOL. Run, Zuko, run from crazy Sokka!
Toph trolled him for burning her feet. You magnificent bastard, you.
| Hero Of The Hazard chapter 2 . 1/26
["No one messes with my woman!" "...What?" "Nothing, Sokka."]
You heard nothing, Sokka. Nothing at all...
["Something about... 'finding a lady friend'..."]
Uh...does that mean Zuko needs more friends? (Making him watch the prisoner and telling him that is pretty weird.)
Oh god, Music night sounds horrible if it sounded like torture. 0_0
["muttering about 'grandbabies'"]
Uncle! (We have a shipper on a literal deck here!)
["Because I'm a bad boy, Katara, a bad boy"]
WHAT?! XD What does that even mean?!
And Katara is forever tied to a tree.