|Reviews for Things Fall Apart|
| The Little Chibi chapter 12 . 9/21/2021
I cackled all the way through, this is hysterical.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2020
Lol very nicely done, good characterization and just the right balance between the serious and the silly. :D
| SLotH4 chapter 12 . 8/23/2020
I love it. This whole collection was great and I appreciate how short it was. It’s nice for a quick read that turns into 12 quick reads.
| SLotH4 chapter 6 . 8/21/2020
Well that was dark...
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/27/2020
Lol ahahahaha I love zuko awkwardly trying to come up with petnames hoping that she won't kill him. I look forward to seeing katara conquer the palace before he gets back
| OrdinaryFruitPunch chapter 6 . 1/16/2020
A delightful bit of viciousness to perfectly cap a day working in customer service. Very pleased with this story :)
| Nine-tailed Keaton chapter 12 . 9/22/2019
I know this story is super old, but I just wanted to say
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2019
I did a rewatch recently and for the first time found myself venturing into ATLA fanfiction. This is the most in character I have seen them so far, thank you.
One thing I find odd is when describing Katara's hair, they write 'brown curls'. Just gives me the picture of her having curly hair, even though we know she doesn't.
Oh, and taking the 'rise with the sun' thing literally. He was referring to their strength not their internal clocks.
Thanks for this.
| GenderBender25 chapter 6 . 12/3/2018
vorite chapter so far. Seriously how many times did the gaang unknowingly kill people ?
| Boogum chapter 2 . 3/7/2018
OMG! DYING! I am still laughing.
| LoserxLoser chapter 12 . 5/20/2017
"I'm not THAT gay."
Oh gods you're killing me I think this is the funniest thing I've read in a LONG time
| LoserxLoser chapter 5 . 5/20/2017
Oh gods i can't take it I'm crying
| LoserxLoser chapter 2 . 5/20/2017
Oh gods this is too much. I think my favorite part was when Zuko went "BAM! Banished."
| TidePoolDevil chapter 6 . 11/7/2016
*howls with laughter* Love this chapter!
| Ginny A Heron chapter 11 . 9/27/2016
Oh gosh oh gosh oh gosh oh gosh oh gosh! I can't stop laughing! This chapter was brilliant! How do you do this? It was so darn hilarious, I can't even...! He made her cry whilst in Katara's body! The imagery! I love this so much! Thank you for writing this!