Reviews for Bedtime Story
Justicerocks chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Aw this was so cute :D I loved it.
Silverfox588 chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
That was a good episode and you put it into a good story. Well done.
samanddianefan10 chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
I like how B.J. doesn't talk down to Erin. Being his daughter, she's bright enough to get every word of his message. Keep 'em coming!
Rebecca Cage chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
This story is very sweet! I like it! Please write more like it!
GetOnTheIce chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
oh! This was so so so so so so sweet!

absolutely loved it.

very well written and very true!

thanks for this story!
Kerri chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
That was very ingenius, sweet and very well done, awesome spin on Mash, great going.
Meatball Surgeons chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Oh, what a darling story! I absolutely loved BJ's improvization! You did an excellent job slimming down a grown-up topic to bite sized portions a child could enjoy! Keep up the good work and please continue writing!
Mistress Twist chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
That was sweet! :D :D I loved it.
beahawk chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
That was sweet :)

very clever and very insightful as well. I loved BJ's dream at the end,