Reviews for The Hook Up
CSI4lyfNCIS13 chapter 17 . 1/19/2010
WE REALLY SHOULD KEEP THIS PAIRING ALIVE 4EVER. THEY GO REALLY GOOD TOGETHER. AWESOME SEX SCENE. I HATE THE SEASON ENDING BUT I DONT THINK THE ENDING WAS CHEESY. I LIKED THE LINE THAT,

They both fell asleep, neither aware that they had just started a love of a lifetime.

I LOVE IT.

XOXO JORDAN
saturn567 chapter 17 . 7/23/2009
awesome job just read this all in one go! keep writing!
saturn567 chapter 12 . 7/23/2009
wow didn't see that twist coming!
saturn567 chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
oh dear , they need to find this guy!
AngellwithoutWings chapter 17 . 5/25/2009
this was an awesome story. i too think we should keep Jessica Angell alive n stories and our hearts. she was easily my favorite character. GO Angell/Flack! this story was a very original story. very good! i enjoyed reading it very much. and now im rambling so yeah. . . .bye.
Montana Angell chapter 17 . 5/17/2009
KEEP F/A Alive seriously keep your writing going so Jess is dead, doesn't mean she has to be dead to us right? I love her and she's going to included in most if not all of my stories great chapter by the way ad i loved that end line it was so sweet can't wait to hear more from you!
Cowgirl 03 chapter 17 . 5/14/2009
Very nicely done! you should write a sequal to this one! Keep Flack and Angell alive!
aka chapter 17 . 5/14/2009
i loved the story and i agree with you that this pairing should stay alive, but you never know
Heavenly-Creation chapter 17 . 5/14/2009
This was really good to read! And if she dies, we shouldn't let her die here, she should be kept alive!

Love always, Heavenly...
Montana Angell chapter 16 . 5/7/2009
Oh that was so uncontrolably awesome is that it? I really loved the last line from Angell it was awesome lol
Ray-Ray chapter 16 . 5/6/2009
please contine i hope flack and angell get there celebration.
Montana Angell chapter 15 . 5/4/2009
Awh the end was so sweet i loved it! Argh Jess got hurt and then she went for a run what a phsyco right? lol can't wait for more so you better update soon! :P
Montana Angell chapter 14 . 4/29/2009
woah! that totally came out of nowhere please updatre soon i have to know whats going to happen loved it btw
Ray-Ray chapter 14 . 4/27/2009
please continue this its so good
Montana Angell chapter 13 . 4/22/2009
Yeay an update wo i loved it poor Jess with the fat lip and all :P But it's obvious she let him hit her :D Update when you can i love it :)
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