Reviews for Perfect
FozuzGaoa chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Niiiice :) !
Im a Skyscraper chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
i liked it
Kittykat0989 chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
iloveme5895 chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
this shit rocks love it

ThatTrueWolf chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
It needs to be made into a small story. Great work!
UrbanReaper chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
I really liked it, more justin/alex stories in general!
PrettyGirlRocks chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
that was really hot and sexy girl and i cant believe it was ur first time writing a sex scene! i would definitely like to read more as long as it doesnt take away from your unspeakable' time. i like that this one it from justins pov and it was very good and jalex was so very cute in it. great descriptions! good luck in all that you do and God Bless. ~alithompson

p.s.: i could definitely see pregnancy or something for this one since there was no mention of a condom...just a thougt!
JayLynne chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
i liked this but i really hope that youu would at least give it until 10 chapters it has potential! )
jalex x chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
that was really good:) you should deffintly do a sequel or something
addictedtohugs chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
KagSanlover chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Pretty good for your first sex scene. A two shot or follow up story would be really great! lol. I really love Jalex. Nice story!
blarghblargh chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
A Two-shot would be great!

Continue please! :D
jalex1 chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
I WANT A Two shot hahaha

:D i love jalex / delena!


Keep it up and get started on another one!
Sugar911 chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
It was really good!

It might be nice to do a 2 shot and have the second part being the aftermath. Ya know what I mean?

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