Reviews for Watermelon
edwardfiend chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
This is too funny. so simple, but its so cute. I can't believe he made her get her own watermelon. Oh well its the thought that counts right? Great oneshot. :)
SilverStella chapter 1 . 12/7/2008

T.E.D.S chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
This story was great for me, simple and funny, and, what I like best, not too romantic. I had a strange thought that Riza met Bradley when going find watermelons, as it's usually Bradley who gives watermelons to people... and besides, I never read that Riza liked watermelons (but it's your stary so write what you want).

There was one thing that irritates me always, and it doesn't matter if it's in english or in polish: spelling mistakes. Yes, I could understand - but it's irritating. Good job, anyway!
Pardison chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Awe that was cute!
Couple of Luck chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
It doesn't sounds funny to me but at the end of the story is very sweet.
Cinderpool-Beam Me Up Sokka chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
(still not accustomed to new fanfiction look) Well looks like you got a free faveriot. I meant to review when I press "add to faves" Oh well, I liked it! I thought it was written very well.
KatrinaEagle chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
DUDE that's just...

Funny. O.o