|Reviews for A flaw in the plan|
| dgreenkitty chapter 16 . 5/3/2010
first i would like to say that i like the story. mostly because Black lives. you've done a fine job weaving Iris into the story line. i could see this as an AU. the thing i'm having issue with is the talking. while you don't have many description paragraphs, you have a lot of talking. the talking isn't formated very well. it's clumped into the paragraphs which makes it difficult to read. i don't think you were finished with the story. please continue. i would like to see how you would end this now that book seven has been released.
| Sakura Lisel chapter 8 . 5/9/2009
Wait so what happened with Harry after Hagrid forcefully took him away from her? If she knows where the Dursley's are living, why didn't she just go after Harry and take him back, after Sirius was arrested?
THEN sue Hagrid and Dumbledore on charges on of kidnapping her nephew and magical assault on her person while kidnapping him. She could have made a pensieve and insisted they view it to see Hagrid's confession of DUmbledore's orders of what to do if she refused to hand Harry over. As James sister and blood relative, she has much right to raise Harry as anyone else.
| Lady Isabelle Black chapter 15 . 3/19/2009
every good so far
skipping forward to the order was a brillant
marianne is their daughter, so that means that she is also harry's cousin
seeing her met everyone else
| Lady Isabelle Black chapter 14 . 2/10/2009
so far so good
when sirius pulls ron into the shrieking shack . . . let iris reveal herself to harry and she is his aunt
reveal that marianne is their daughter to harry . . peter , , and remus
| Lady Isabelle Black chapter 10 . 1/26/2009