Reviews for The Elevator ride
A CHICHEN LEG chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
I got a super...I got a chicken...ugn SUPER CHICKEN
I got a chicken...I got a leg...ugn CHICKEN LEG
SUPER CHICKEN…CHICKEN LEG…ugn

SUPER CHICKEN CHICKEN LEG!

:-P
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2016
would be great if sum one would make a long story out of this I cant right very good but I know sum one can... love to see a love story out of this along one like a million words long if possible. or more ...
Zakimam6outlook.com chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
Yyy
ShinigamiNoKitsune209 chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
HAHAHAHA! Nice one! Not much detail in the sex, but it was still good. Nice job.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
this was nice elevator sex awesome Ino is a hot babe that's for sure
Greggery chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
This made me cum
BlackDragonShinigami chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Detective kiba on the case
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Haha it was weird
mysticon chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Lol i was reading this while waiting a film with my girlfriend and lets just say im got sum great plans for her...
DeFEcToR115 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Amazing one shot

i usually never read one shots because they're to short for my taste but this one caught my attention and was great thanks for and awesome lemon
awesoem stories chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
I dont say this to alot fanfics but man...this story was AWESOME!
bacon chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
i like bacon and ino should have suk de kak
naruto chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
how do you know i did this?ps it was epic
Anime Fan 295647 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
cool
Flyboyrell176 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
great as always..the elevator sex was a surprise though lol
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