Reviews for The Rebirth of The Fallen Angel
dyannazri chapter 1 . 10/3
will you update it soon? I really like your story️
lucario2011 chapter 7 . 5/6/2015
When will you update this story it is awesome
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happyperson chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
I agree with beer is food
happyperson chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
I second Beer is Food
( although I think beer is a drink. Meh)
Beer is food chapter 7 . 2/24/2014
Although this story is more or less unreadable, because of your grammar, i cannot help but like the plot. It kept me reading, despite the butchered language, until the last posted chapter and left me wanting for more.
The same goes for your other story.
I hope you are going to return someday and finish/rewrite both your stories. I will even read them if your writing in english doesn't improve... if the plot continues to be as good.
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
good story but please rewrite it with better english as it's hurting my head having to break down everything to understand it as you're using wrong words or leaving out words for things you've even left out letters that would aid in understanding things
inner-chan chapter 7 . 2/1/2014
kya this is awsome hope theres a next chapter :) nya
Ivyhunter10 chapter 7 . 7/15/2013
Pleas please please please ppllleeeeaaassssse update.
Zirushimi chapter 7 . 3/16/2013
Yay! Mama's coming! XD
link1211 chapter 7 . 1/31/2013
cool
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
You got to many grammer problems in this story for me
The Lone Rurouni chapter 7 . 7/25/2012
A rather good and interesting story so far. Any updates planned?
dimensiontimetraveler chapter 7 . 9/6/2011
errr... if it's that ez to open dimension gate.. then.. shouldn't orochimaru be invincible now? he can cross dimensions n revive the dead to do his bidding.. and im sure for someone as evil as him, there's gonna be some loyal followers.. cuz the promise of power and such... god. this is...D: grr
Black Ace 0 chapter 7 . 10/29/2010
Update soon. Please.
Evci chapter 7 . 8/11/2010
Wow this has a lot of pontencial ! Hope you update soon, I love it !
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