|Reviews for Mission's Gift|
| addyliciousyaoi chapter 13 . 3/4/2017
This has been a great read! Thank you for writing a wonderful story! I have really enjoyed it. :)
| Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 5 . 5/27/2016
I have a feeling that i know where this is going,...
| ichkak chapter 13 . 11/22/2015
Super cute ending.
| HelleBelle chapter 13 . 5/6/2015
Oh that is a story I would sooooooooooo love the read.
| jess.c.kong chapter 13 . 12/14/2014
I'm glad they got together but I really disagree with Iruka's actions. I felt like Kakashi was in the right in this story...what if he didn't want kids? No matter if it was to continue the clan, it was done under omission and I feel like iruka could have been more open to Kakashi about the elders's wishes and gotten better results than the way he handled it bc it could have been seen as entrapment or even worse, something the elders would have done. Though I liked the concept and the story itself, I still can't agree about the characters' decisions. Which isn't a reflection on your writing style because that is what made the story plot bearable.
| Adelphia1928 chapter 3 . 10/8/2014
the song is from Prince of Egypt. I claim my promised cookies and taunt certain stalking ninja with them.
| Ameranthian chapter 13 . 9/8/2014
Iruka:" Cause our next kid, your going to carry."
Kakashi: "WHAT!?" I can so totally see pregnant Kakashi and a very pleased Iruka laughing at him. So funny.
| Ameranthian chapter 12 . 9/8/2014
This is such a sweet end for the chapter. After so much hurt and sadness, on both their sides, Kekashi and Iruka finally found something they both wanted and needed in each other. I can totally see then in like a year, bickering over what color to paint the walls or something like that. I really like the depth and feeling this story has. It seems more real and realistic than many full fledged books out there. I think the author has wonderfully captured the characters of each of these people in the story and opened them up in ways that show the deepest workings of them. I really like the writing style. It is easy to comprehend and tastefully and colorfully written. Excellent work.
| Ameranthian chapter 11 . 9/8/2014
Kakashi's getting all sentimental here. I can't say it doesn't suit him though. He would make an interesting father. And Iruka is already making a great dad. I really hate the stupid council. They can all go die, or better yet, let Kakashi kill them. I'd like that so very very much.
| Ameranthian chapter 7 . 9/8/2014
Grrr! I don't get it! What is Iruka wanting Tsunade to do to him!? Gah! Its killing me. I have to read the rest now.
| Ameranthian chapter 3 . 9/8/2014
The lullaby came from the Dreamworks movie "The Prince of Egypt". But aside from that, I like the story so far. It different, but not so much that it's weird. Thanks so much for posting it.
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/27/2014
Gyyyaah! So incredible! I loved the ending. You are magic!
| narutonarutolove chapter 12 . 8/18/2014
iruka loves to feel sorry for himself, doesn't he?
| MikoEpos chapter 3 . 5/15/2014
Love the story, and the fact that I recognised the lyrics right away(Prince of Egypt, right?):)
| Kunohichi8 chapter 13 . 3/11/2014
love the ending...
i want more...