Reviews for To Be Broken
AspiringToWrite chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
This was so sad, I'd like to see more too bad it ended here. D:

Keep up the good work of writing! Loved all the parts, and I don't think Tormod was OOC on the emotional part at ALL.

Good character describing and story. Again keep it up.
Nanimonaimono chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Oh man, this was great. Truly amazing.

I can't really pinpoint what it was about the writing that appealed to me, but some parts did make me feel intensely, and that's pretty much a piece's goal, no?

Specifically, fatherly Muarim made me so damn happy. And the scene with Sothe catching up with Tormod but not managing to convince him had me biting my thumb and hoping something miraculous would happen.

Excellent work, I'm fav'ing it!
Blumpen chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
D Good show... X3 I just have one question... what does CLOSET COMPANION MEAN? lol that was a funny typo! XD

( It's so sorrowful... -determined- ;) MORE!

I can't see it end like this!

... ) Will there be more characters?

ANYWAY! MORE CHAPTERS!