|Reviews for Where the story starts|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
i love this story please continue it!
| Maddy Love Castiel chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
I liked it!
Always the gentleman!
Cute of him to comfort her!
| E.L. Crawford chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Contenuie for the love of edward!
| MissEbullition chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Love this story! I was wondering if this story as well as the grocery store one was up for adoption. I have just finished 3 one shots which I will be posting at Christmas and was looking for a a couple of new stories to write. Will I be able to add in more things to the story or do you want me to leave the chapters as they are? I will also make sure to mention that your the original author! Hope to hear from you soon
| Ithileon chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Don't feel bad, I'm probably slower at typing.
| Acorn9881 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I LOVE your story!
Please make it a full story!
| demented bunny chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
YOUR COMPUTORS MEAN! i like this story and i'm interseted update soon X
| Charlotte-Cullen-x chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Please continue! I want to know what's going to happen!
| Kimmy-Kat Cullen chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
| dtacmm chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
very interesting. this story has potential. you should definetely continue.
| CeruleanKitten chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
hm, I kind of think it should have been drug out a bit more. Taking down the student should have taken longer, if he was spazing out enough to gun up the school he wouldn;t have given up so easily, you know? Anyway I did like it, It was a well written little chapter and I would definitlly like to see more : )
| Beryl Butterfly chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Okay, how did your computer tell you that you type like a fourth grader?
I like your story.
| twilightlover289 chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
I liked it. You should definately continue
| Stronger than you since 1915 chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
more more! i really liked it.
| andreabl2 chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
plz continue to write