that was hilarious

totally funny, dude

hehe i think i found an error... "Let's move on to my group, the Inner Senshi." it's outer senshi, right? o.o

Guess she must have been really drunk xD

Yeah, it was quite OOC x3 Uh my advice... pretty much as the previous reviewer said. but you're the one to decide what you write

Not a great fanfic and Ruka-chan never speaks like that.

She was a little cold in Sailor Moon Super but that was because of her duty.

There is a little humor which I find ok but Haruka would never think like that about the Sailor Senshi. Maybe about or probaly of the Starlights but not of the solar system Sailor Senshi.

Next time, try to write more in character