Reviews for Fortune
SquishyCool chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
I liked it, especially how well you portrayed Theresa ]

Ya know, I've always been kind of curious as to how she lived for hundreds of years, but her brother didn't...

Anyway, great story!
No. 136 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
M... I like this. Those questions that Garth asked, they definitely pique my interest. I enjoy the speculation and "what-if" possibilities being hinted at here. It adds another level of depth to the story, something I felt was somewhat lacking in the game.

Good job in keeping true to the characters and their personalities. Great dialogue and characterization here, really.

All in all, a superb oneshot. Definitely one of the better ones I've read.
Eddynessofdoom chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I love speculations! It would be awesome if the dog were involved in later games... but while it's clear on who you're talking about, referring to the main character as 'He' with a capital H makes him sound too much like god. That's the only think I'd change, though- this is pretty good stuff. Yays!
exiled-druid chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
intresting to say the least.

personally, i couldn't help but to wonder what they talked about while my character wasn't around (i think too much into the background work and stories to pay attention to some of the things i should be paying attention to. that's why i had to play through it 3 times...)

i liked how Garth told of the Hero of Oakvale and his family, and i liked how you made Theresa react to it. great job and i hope to see more, if not from this then from another Fable piece.
Red Sectoid chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
I really liked it. Always thought Garth was cool. Although At the end of the game I thought the way theresa said the spire was hers she'd be the next big baddie.
almostinsane chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Great story! Wow. Garth was kind of cruel... Thanks for writng this. God bless!