Reviews for The prince's pauper
Black-Dranzer-1119 chapter 5 . 11/17/2008
This is very very awesomeness. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what will happen next. I wonder if Light will ever beat L and how. Update soon
sayuri2023 chapter 5 . 11/16/2008
The story keeps getting better and better; I espescially love your L X Light interactions.

Just one suggestion, could we have slightly longer chapters?
Jesi and Frost chapter 5 . 11/16/2008
lol Light's acting like a spoiled brat, which he is. cant wait for the next chappie yupp yupp!

-_-;; namu
Mwahahahahahaha chapter 4 . 11/14/2008
Ha. L is so awesome.

A run-on sentence is a sentence that keeps going for too long, and needs to be divided into two sentences. Or three. Possibly four. Anyways, it's also two(or three or four) simple sentences that have been put together, but aren't related at all. Aside from those, and the few typos you made, the chapter was great! I especially loved your description of the marketplace, and you got L's character down. Update soon!
Kat chapter 4 . 11/13/2008
I see nothing wrong with it.

Yay L-Kun is here! and he Totolly Pwnd light!

Hope too see more! Bubye!
Black-Dranzer-1119 chapter 4 . 11/13/2008
This chapter was very awesome. Damn why couldn't Light have his horse run over Misa. I can't wait to find out how or when Light and L will meet for the second time. I wonder if it will have been for stealing cake. Hmm... lol. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon
sayuri2023 chapter 4 . 11/13/2008
Yay! L's here! Nice going...
Jesi and Frost chapter 4 . 11/13/2008
lol L was a smart a$$ while eating cate, and probably STILL looked fine. lol cant wait for the next chappie yupp yupp!

-_-;; namu
Mwahahahahahaha chapter 3 . 11/13/2008
fairly good. You have alot of description, which is good but sometimes you repeat stuff. Also, watch for run-on sentences. Update soon!
Jesi and Frost chapter 3 . 11/13/2008
lol poor light. when does L come in? cant wait for the next chappie yupp yupp!

-_-;; namu
sayuri2023 chapter 3 . 11/12/2008
Run Light Run! Run for your life ! I think its Matsuda's turn to be trapped now... he he
Black-Dranzer-1119 chapter 3 . 11/12/2008
So you decided to put it off till chapter 4. Well at least you updated quick. I swear not even being Kira deserves Misa as a punishment. Update soon
sayuri2023 chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
Can't wait for our darling L to gallop to the scene! I just wish Sayu was a bit more considerate. The story is going in an excellent direction; and hope you update soon.
Black-Dranzer-1119 chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
This is really awesome so far. I'm glad you agree with me. Sayu is starting to bug me as much as Misa is though. How can anyone like that... THING! I can't wait for L to come into the story but I think Iw ill be able to hold out another chapter. lol. Update soon
sayuri2023 chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
The plot looks promising; eagerly waiting for the second chapter.

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