Reviews for Avatar Book 4: Air
Nikolai22 chapter 23 . 3/21/2016
Great story!
Almost all characters get their cameos!
Well written!
Glad I found this story, would have been a shame to have missed it.

Only a few questionable things that are easily overlooked.

Oh lord, bless thine author yonder, for their product is to be treasured more so than a mighty codpiece. Milord author dost posses talent and divinity.
Read this shit! This story is a goddamn plate of mashed potatoes with gravy and good chicken on the side; it is the son and heir of lords; the opposite of a product of a knave.
Nikolai22 chapter 22 . 3/21/2016
Chapter 22~
Epic...but only one flaw.

So the airbenders lose their power yes? Isn't there still earthbenders, firebending, and even non bender units in the battle? Even if it is just the airbenders aren't there still a shit ton of them? Killers who could take out the supposed "handful" remaining?
Also, how come EVERY fanfic I have read where Azula joins the side of the Avatar ends up with her dying?! (Except for the shitty romance ones lol...she is not permitted to live as a good person lol)
Nikolai22 chapter 21 . 3/21/2016
Chapter 21~ damn!
Oh shit! Bruh!
Nikolai22 chapter 19 . 3/21/2016
Chapter 19~
*mario -1 life music
Ba Ba bup bup bup bub buh buddup baddup
Nikolai22 chapter 18 . 3/21/2016
Chapter 18~
Yesssss, join the dark side of the force.
I believe that bending is not possible in the spirit world, but that's cool.
Nikolai22 chapter 16 . 3/20/2016
Chapter 16~
Who would have thought? It was the cabbage man!
He knew all along! XD
I'm lovin it
Nikolai22 chapter 15 . 3/20/2016
Chapter 15~
oh shit! New world order under the avatar.
The fake one. I'm liking this. But still have no idea how it could turn out yet. And I like that too.
Nikolai22 chapter 14 . 3/20/2016
Chapter 14~
I'm liking this. Badass
Nikolai22 chapter 12 . 3/20/2016
Chapter 12~ bruh I was not ready.
Nikolai22 chapter 11 . 3/20/2016
Chapter 11~
Militant air nomads? Blasphemy!
Nikolai22 chapter 10 . 3/20/2016
Chapter 10~
Boomerang always comes in clutch, I believe it has the power.
Nikolai22 chapter 8 . 3/19/2016
Chapter 8~
LOL this Indiana Jones wannabe
Nikolai22 chapter 5 . 3/17/2016
Chapter 5~
I'm liking this, and im liking where this is going
Nikolai22 chapter 3 . 3/16/2016
Chapter 3~
oh shit, this story looks like it's bout to be a REAL one!
dominique.peltier.31 chapter 6 . 4/26/2014
I don't know if I just read this wrong, but it seemed like there are two contradictory paragraphs in this chapter. When Loi talks about being friends with Azula when they were younger, he said he was younger than her. A little later when he is arguing with Zuko and talks about when they started dating, he says he's older than her.

Besides that and a few other mistakes, I really like your story so far!
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