Reviews for Together: Puzzle Pieces
burn-a-dark-soul5000 chapter 9 . 8/4/2015
Omg you didn't finish! And your sooooo close! DX
Clarityy chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
This story is very good and I really like it. Last night I was reading the chapter 9 and I was screaming in excitement XD The plot is very interesting and I like the way you write. I truly love how is Mac in your story. I mean... he's a 17/19 years old boy, but he's still Mac, the Mac we know. He's not out of character. The same thing for Goo, but of course, we don't know her as well as we know Mac, because she's not in the original cartoon as much as she should, don't you think so? She's a great character, so creative and sweet and original.
What I try to say is that your story is very realistic -you describe very well a young man's life, with his problems, his feelings, his thoughts... it's pretty much what we all feel at this age...- , but you still keep the essence of the original cartoon, which is awesome, I really don't know how you do it. Mac and Goo -and also Terrence! You found the way to make him interesting!- are exactly as I think the original characters would be when they grow up.
You actually made me wish with all my soul the reuniĆ³n of Mac and Goo! It was SO touching! I mean... I practically was able to hear Mac's heart breaking when he thought Goo was with another guy. The relationship you have created between them is very sweet, exactly as a perfect relationship should be. They are like best friends, they know each other perfectly, they are crazy for each other, they need each other, they have an amazing bond. And the way they miss each other! It makes you miss each of them as well XD... I don't know, I just loved it XD.
Sooo... you ARE going to update chapter 10 very soon, don't you? Don't leave me like this! I really reeeeeeaaaaally wanna know what will happen! I finished chapter 9 last night and I've been thinking about it all day.
I really hope you will continue with this story :)
HigherSilver chapter 9 . 2/11/2013
This is really such a beautiful story. I love Mac and Goo, and I love Terrence in here too. The romances are wonderful, not too fluffy. I hope you finish it eventually, although chap nine makes a decent ending.
JNSQ chapter 9 . 1/20/2013
This has to be one of my guiltiest pleasures on this site. The characters are well done, the story is paced well, and I don't want to kill any of the main characters yet. It's all kinds if great. 9.5/10 friend.
UnknownPen chapter 9 . 11/5/2012
Do you know howmuch I love this story? I'll tell you. SOOOO MUCH! Mac and Goo are adorable. Kari's awesome and your version of Terrence is the most human he's ever been. Each of the characters has a unique and interesting voice - how do you do that? I'm especially LOVING the reunion scene - Mac watching Jacob with his daughter and not even realizing it. Such a great set up. The only litle thing is if you could maybe have your work beta'd for spelling and stuff like that. It's not a big deal so excuse me if I sound pedantic. Anyway, I'm so glad they're back together. So ready for some Mac-and-Goo-iness. Please continue this story.
Reader Guy chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
so far im loving the sequal cant wait to see how things go
Guest chapter 9 . 7/4/2012
Loving this story. Please continue. I beg you.
Syn'ri chapter 9 . 6/19/2012
Finish it! I love this story, and have loved it for years! Please, finish it! Even if it is not half of what you want it to be! Please give me an end! I have waited so long to have them meet up again and have Mac out of his depression! You are too far along now, you have to finish it!
redstreetcookie chapter 9 . 5/29/2012
what the hell! update this ...this story is so makes me imagine how me and my love would endure this situation...even though you havent updated this in 2 years i hope u wont give up on this story
VampsMoonAngel chapter 9 . 2/6/2012
Hey! I found the other link thingy which is this! Yay! And stuff and stuff, anyway, i really liked the chapters and i really do hope u have more up soon! I can't wait! -let God bless u!, Avi :)
Amendadendron chapter 9 . 7/18/2011
Holy crap. Reading this story was actually cathartic for me, and you have no idea how little I actually get to use that word (in reference to myself). You have such a broad perspective on things it's amazing and I love how your narration for each character is so IC it's near PERFECT! You have down all their little quirks, nuances, and all the motivations are perfect... You give them this extra dimension and though your fic is a little dark compared to what I might expect from this section, it seems appropriate for the ages they're all supposed to be. You have a special gift for a) being able to see things from lots of people's perspectives b) making me CARE about your OC's (My heart goes out to Tzu.) and c) making me laugh, hard, in the midst of all the sad stuff that's going on. I love it! Thanks for posting this!

- Kyrotec
JarethxXxSarah chapter 9 . 1/8/2011
This was one of the most incredible fan fictions I have ever read! No joke and no exaggeration! It stayed so true to the characters, it was insightful, it was well written, and I could picture it all happening in my head too! I loved the characters you did create like Tzu and Kari and Jake! I am just so obsessed with this story! Now I'm depressed there aren't any more chapters for me to come running to after finishing my chores around the house! I hope you update soon! You should be really proud of yourself and your work! :)

Edward Foster chapter 9 . 11/12/2010
I was really looking forward to reading this again, I do love the fact of 'relationships alway cause problems' but i do sence the real expirience, plus the bunny part, genius the rush of sugar and emotion was a good combo, Keep it up!

Darelle The Author chapter 9 . 10/8/2010
Well...SHE SHOOTS, SHE SCORES! You have done it again. This chapter opened and made me feel better about my crappy week with Mac's improved attitude. But then when you brought Goo back and she was with you-know-who AND Moire, when Goo said she was mad at Mac, and when Goo said that she had to tell him something I got physically ill. I really thought that Goo had "jumped ship" so to speak, I am so happy to be proven wrong! When I read that Jake was playing with Moire and I got PHYSICALLY ILL, that's when I realized that you completely created something that, to me, was a masterpiece. I only have the editing to complain about because some words were misspelled or just missing did very, very little to diminish the chapter's enjoyability though. Keep knockin' chapters out, can't wait to see how this one ends.
Tall T chapter 9 . 8/15/2010
Iffy? Not too iffy, I hope, because this chapter made me warm all over. And despite the chapter title, I did not see the reunion coming the way it did. Well done. My only objection is that I still don't quite understand how and Mac lost contact so completely.
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