Reviews for The Oriental Adventure
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2016
Too many plot holes. Lost interest after reading the incorrect address. Godric's Hollow is not in London. Put some effort in you call yourself a fan. School boy error.
Esmereilda chapter 20 . 4/13/2016
phew at least harry is safe
Esmereilda chapter 18 . 3/29/2016
well you know they are going to get lily and mai back
Esmereilda chapter 16 . 3/28/2016
I didn't think it was possible but you made yami marik seem xtra twisted in this fic but I you save the potters here
Esmereilda chapter 15 . 3/20/2016
nope it is you yami marik that will consigned to the shadows not atem
Esmereilda chapter 14 . 3/18/2016
they will still be suspicious of him ra or no ra
Esmereilda chapter 13 . 3/16/2016
poor joey having to face ra and not even facing the real bad guy
Esmereilda chapter 10 . 3/12/2016
ok I wasn't expecting that
Esmereilda chapter 9 . 3/11/2016
but harry seems to be the favorite of lady luck and has a knack for oming out of sticky sitches on top
Esmereilda chapter 8 . 3/10/2016
modern magic shall soon come in contact with ancient Egyptian magic
Esmereilda chapter 7 . 3/9/2016
that's wone way to beat legilimancy XD
Esmereilda chapter 6 . 3/9/2016
lol its pretty funny the great leaders of the light sneaking around in a young boy's house XD
Esmereilda chapter 5 . 3/8/2016
I highly doubt that but this new Malfoy certainly shares his brothers flair for the dramatic
Esmereilda chapter 4 . 3/8/2016
great now they have caught the eye of marik's rare hunters
Esmereilda chapter 3 . 3/8/2016
I wonder why shadi is interested in harry and how is harry connected the ancient past
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