Ok, the Akatsuki make NO SENSE.. Naruto doesn't even HAVE the nine anymore.. and she's not nine-tailed anymore, either... Their plan is KAPUT... It's done... Failed... They waited too long... So them even being on the radar is ridicules... Heck even Nibi, Han and Roshi aren't there anymore... The statue of the outer path should look like swiss cheese... (which should kinda be a clue, something went wrong in an unfixable way).. It took naruto 3 years to make the "big plan" of just walking in and blowing it all up? Seems.. A bit far fetched.. If he had the power the whole time, then why did he let Iwa depopulate itself, sending idiots to die, over and over AND OVER? Just walk in.. *boom*, walk out... No fuss, no muss. Naruto can theoritically blow up PLANETS... A village (especially one, that AT THIS POINT, should only have a couple dozen ninja left, since ninja aren't exactly an inexhaustible resource... Every single one that dies at his blades, is YEARS AND YEARS of training and conditioning), shouldn't be much of an exercise.

So Itachi lives in this one? *sigh*, well, I hope naruto DOES train his descendants well, because they are gonna get to do ALL THIS, ALL OVER AGAIN in a few generations!(at most) Such a colossal blunder on Naruto's part.

Sasuke's only goal was to kill Itachi it was an obsession even sleeping with random girls wouldnt help that goal additionally not all members of the male half of the race want anything to do with sex and think only with the dicks

Haku had a good time. If he has lemon but removing that the story is good.

That day a boy became a man.

F Kushina. May the Force be with you.

Interesting.

I'm not sure Naruto being a Namikaze would "motivate" iwa into attacking the Leaf, considering naruto has already killed LOADS of their people, threatened the kage and his father was given the whole "flee on sight" by THEM. I kinda think naruto being a Namikaze would instead make all the other villages drop the snake sannin like a radioactive rock! (as in "don't poke the sleeping dragon") If naruto were ATTACKING other villages? That would be a different story, but with all the villages being "at peace", EXCEPT the sound (which is new), getting naruto to "focus" on your village, when there is no reason too, seems like something no leader would do.

I question why Iwa would even CARE about who "qualified" and who didn't at the exams.. They're OPPOSED VILLAGES... It doesn't make any sense why they would have even SENT anyone... Wouldn't they have just made their own? (notice, nobody in canon, because if there was.. They kinda would have noticed naruto's looks! But then again, the chunin exams were missing A LOT.. "Land of Tea", "Land of Birds", "land of artisans", "village hidden in the graves", many, many others that SHOULD have been there, plus the whole "chakra shield around the whole village" was also suspiciously absent. add to the fact orochi COULD NOT have summoned minato (during the fight).. (he was sealed by the reaper.. So TECHNICALLY not "all dead") and it really makes that whole fight a bit of a ?... As to why writers add it to their stories. Plus the fact that the second hokage could have broken the effect at ANY TIME (there is a speech he can/should have given at the start). Makes for some problems logistically.

Shouldn't Naruto already know ALL about Kabuto? He read Mizuki's mind before he snuffed him, way beck in chapter 2 or 3.. So he's already got all the info he needs.. In fact, why is Kabuto STILL IN THIS STORY? Shouldn't Naruto have told the hokage and the hokage taken certain "steps" to get orochi outta the village? There really shouldn't be ANY mystery here (although, there really shouldn't be any mystery AT ALL, to a main character that can read minds... Kinda defeats the purpose to having a secret)

So negji would team up with the people that ACTUALLY killed his father (and he knows it)... To get "revenge" on someone that was 3 years old to "get revenge for killing his father", while trying to enrage the one that CAN remove the seal on his head.. In order to... Remove the seal on his head? And serve the ones that killed his father? That's pretty much the argument your going with huh?.. UMMM... I know you wanna stick as close as possible to cannon.. But... This creates all KINDS of logical problems here.

They are looking Mizuki? UM.. Can't the force just read his mind? This should take like 10 minutes tops to find the traitor. ROFL

Anyway... Not bad.

I find it logistically impossible for civilians to be on a "council" and NOT do any paper work,,, How do they stay there? What EXACTLY would be their "function" then? It can't be the money, the ninja's of the village could EASILY kill them all and take it all, if it was just money... So if they serve no function, have no resource that cannot be duplicated or just taken... Then, how could they POSSIBLY have any sway? (scratches head)

"you are not as strong as you used to be".. Correct me if I'm wrong, but kyuubi still has 4 1/2 tails right? Well garaa, with ONE could decimate the village... 1! Kyuubi is LEAGUES above the ENTIRE Leaf banding together to take her out.. and they are NOWHERE near that, in this story. She's also got ALL of kushina and minato's techniques ALONG with all of the kyuubi's powers and techniques (not filtered through a human).. So there is no way ANY of them can stand a chance.. Not logically, not in any way, shape or form. In fact in the show, the only reason the old toad was able to even make seals to suppress the power of the tailed beasts was because, the power had to go THROUGH humans, but here? NOPE... She's quite LITERALLY all their nightmares come to pass.

To anyone about to read this DONT ITS JUST SHITTY PIRN written by a horny idiot incapable of thinking without their genitals

So basically this is just shit porn written by a shit author

Génial l'histoire était intéressante de légère incohérences avec revan mais sinon je suis vraiment heureux que une histoire aussi géniale n'ai pas été abandonné comme d'autres l'on fait avec les leur

ah i wish you fictions actually left the world and actually interacted with the rest of the galaxy some how :( love the story though!

Ottima storia! Complimenti!