|Reviews for One of the Guys|
| JasmineMarie84 chapter 4 . 5/4/2009
Emmett sure chose a great time to call. LOL I love his concern for her foot though, he's a sweetheart.
Ooh! Alice and Rose. :)
LOL Bella's reaction to her outfit, or lack there of. Poor Bella.
Ooh, jealous Edward. I'm glad Jake is so understanding.
| JasmineMarie84 chapter 3 . 5/4/2009
LMAO Hungover Bella thinking her stomach grew an arm.
Poor Edward getting pushed out of bed. LOL
Damn, that lemon was hot. Very impressive for your first.
Aw, I loved their talk, it went very well.
| JasmineMarie84 chapter 2 . 5/4/2009
Emmett definitely is priceless. LOL
LOL Emmett and Bella's 'carpet' conversation.
“Well, since you can hear. I’ll give you a little shout out next time. Something like ‘oh yes…right there….harder….hey Eddie…faster’.” LMAO Poor Edward.
Aw, I love that Edward takes such good care of her.
| JasmineMarie84 chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
I love hungover Bella, she is hilarious.
Aw the guys are such sweethearts to her.
Emmett, love him.
Aww poor Edward. LOL
| pavlovsbell11 chapter 12 . 4/17/2009
Emmett was hilarious this chapter, he's so loveable.:)
| pavlovsbell11 chapter 11 . 4/17/2009
I love Truth or Dare! Not just cuz of the sexy times, but because all of them are together. Jasper was so cute.
| pavlovsbell11 chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
I love fluff, this is all so adorable. And Bella's Lullaby.:) Cute. And sure, I'd go for a fruit salad.;) I'm going to check right now.;)
| pavlovsbell11 chapter 9 . 4/17/2009
Yayayayay! Of course she loves him too! It was about time she figured it out.;)
| pavlovsbell11 chapter 8 . 4/17/2009
Oh, so cute! I love that Jazzy and Em already knew what was going on with Eddie. They are so smart.;) Can't wait to see what happens next!
| pavlovsbell11 chapter 6 . 4/17/2009
Did I review the last chapter? I can't remember (my memory is so fucking bad) so I'll just review this one. It was awesome, as usual. Sometimes I feel like Eddie's dirty talk is a tad too dirty (not really my thing) but his sexyness makes up for it;). And yaay, some Alice/Rosalie/Bella! Yes, that I DO like. I'm weird like that.;) Anyway, another awesome chapter!
| pavlovsbell11 chapter 4 . 4/17/2009
Yaay, Alice and Rosalie! But my god, Alice gets crazier in every story I read about her. It's amazing.;)
| pavlovsbell11 chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
It didn't suck at all! Don't worry.:) But honestly, Eddie is being rather stupid. Doesn't he want more than just to be 'a fuckbuddy'? Ah well, who knows what will happen one day. Great story so far!
| pavlovsbell11 chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
I like it! I'm already in love with Bella-post-drunk.;) Can't wait to see what happens with her and Eddie.;)
| wack-e-nurse chapter 12 . 4/11/2009
i really like this story so update it soon and let me what happens to bella and edward and the rest of the gang too.
| AnUnbrokenHorse aka RushtonElf chapter 12 . 3/31/2009
Short chapters are ok... just as long as they are written by you!
Great story so far :)