Reviews for Untouchable Like A Distant Diamond Sky
WiseOldSoul chapter 11 . 12/15/2014
ummm,
one min, he tells her he loves tanya for superficial reasons...
then the next, all of a sudden he loves bella?
not sure i like the ending so much...
not like that tanya got away with all the abuse at the end there...
it's a cute romcom, sort of, but not really believable ending...
the sudden epiphany after all of the emotional truth...
good writing, however...
Guest chapter 11 . 12/11/2014
I really liked your story, but I felt that Bella forgave him way to easily. The ending was kinda rushed, but it was still pretty good.
MalikaDaughterOfWisdom chapter 11 . 11/19/2014
ERMAGAWD. .GAWD. SO KAWAIIIIIIIIII I LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 11 . 10/15/2014
I don't even know what happened there, a bit of a mess.
Guest chapter 9 . 10/15/2014
She has no right to be so angry- to Edward everything is coming out of left field- she should suck it up, seriously.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/15/2014
Eurgh, Bella needs some self-control. Even if she is in love with him she shouldn't be dancing with him like that. For her sake I'm glad she's "breaking up" with Edward, now she doesn't have to pretend to be good with Edward and Tanya while hating it. She can now hate it as openly as she wants.

But I am curious as to how Edward feels. It seems like there's more going on there.
Motherof8 chapter 10 . 6/25/2014
Doormat Bella is back
guest chapter 11 . 2/6/2014
good story
guest chapter 11 . 2/6/2014
started really well and could have continued into a more mature and heartfelt story. but somehow with bella screaming and punching,edward crying and tanya cussing the end did not justify what you started. story had a very mature beginning but a hurried attempt at ending. good try however.
BabyYoureMyOxygen chapter 11 . 11/23/2013
Definitely OOC, but I loved it anyways:)
FelicityA chapter 3 . 9/15/2013
Loved this first Chapter! This was really good! :D
paulinafranciscaa chapter 11 . 9/3/2013
i didnt like that bella forgive edward, i mean he almost beat her and said some bad things. dont like the ending
debslmac chapter 11 . 7/8/2013
:) loved this story
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 5/20/2013
Hope she means it
Motherof8 chapter 7 . 5/20/2013
Hate when she is a doormat
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