Reviews for Dueling Dreamers
PrettyWithAPistol chapter 1 . 4/29
While there were some descriptions (and even dialogue) that were ultimately superfluous and detracted from any believable naturalness in a given scene, this was still a pleasant read.
The subtlety in some of the responses was lovely and intriguing, while the view for the readers watching it all play out was intriguing.

Thank you for sharing your tale, and I wish you well with your continued writing endeavors~
Roksolana chapter 1 . 4/12/2017
What a nice story!
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
Great story!
Sazzle76 chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
This was really cute, poor grumpy old Jareth.
flooding-rivers chapter 1 . 2/12/2016
I really enjoyed your story. It was nice and sweet, very well planned and well written. I guess that I Like how much it seems like professional writing. Also the dialog you use is perfect. It's interesting and new, it also seems like dialog that these characters might actually say.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
That... Sigh... That was simply beautiful. Perfection. I love it. I truly do. 3 no star for you, you get a heart. :3 ...beautiful
HollyHobbit13 chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
What a great read!
Honoria Granger chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Absolutely charming. Poor Jareth, just wanting someone special around. And now he's got the someone he wants. Will keep an eye out for more by you. Thanks for the delightful read.
TashaRose chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
{claps} Wonderful
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
LOL! Cute. ,'
VampChick76 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Awesome job!

MichAre1a chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Very cute! I love their exchange at the end!

VampireMafiaQueen chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Okay I loved this one shot some much that I want it to be turned in to a full story . Is that in the books maybe ? Please !
WillowDarling chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
oh ho ho, so clever you are jareth. "but perhaps one day...if you keep wishing, you'll catch up." I do believe that is a challenge X3
LadyShalimariVilyanna chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Wonderful! Love the idea that she was picking up on his emotions, across the void, so to speak. well done.
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