|Reviews for The Best Laid Plans|
| flubbernaut chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
That was SO cute! Good job!
| Cookie Creed chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Wait, so they don't get together in the books? What's up with that! I need to read them now and find out.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
| KristoffandAnna chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
It's really cute - you should totally write chapter 2 ;)
| M.J chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
| Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
This was great, I loved it, please keep writing great things like this!
| myjumpingsocks chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Oh, LOVE the ending! Great job!
| adeline mcintosh chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
to cute :)
| ShreddingRibbons chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
eheh, doon's horny. and that amuses me in a strange and obnoxious way.
| fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
I liked how this story was laid out. No I don't know anything about "The City of Ember," but I appreciate the descriptive nature of your writing so I ventured to read this. Plus as you know T ratings invoke interest from me. I decided to read other stories from your works whilst I await the next update on your latest Naruto story.
Having described a long time friendship between these two characters their union is touching. It sounds like they came to an end of the world type experience, so with newfound love and a hope for the future, it ended very nicely.
| inactiveacount121212 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
I loved it! Great Job! :)
| lolagurll124 chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Wow, Doon-the-loon has some nerve there.
| Hazeljv chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Aw, that's sweet. Not to mention a great ending and I've got to agree with you, The Ember Series had nothing like this which I think made a lot of people angry/sad/etc.
| JadrienFilian chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Aww that's sweet!
| Hahukum Konn chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
About time for some proper Doon/Lina. XD Nice one-shot. :P