Reviews for Defiled Innocence
JustHereToDropBy chapter 1 . 4/10
I'm going to adopt this story and finish it is that's fine with you
Mr. Mayonaka Sakura chapter 1 . 7/13/2016
I LUV IT! The lusterous sinful intent of a strong fit man. I could imagine Pit and Ike in this state. Nice job!
snow. x . fairy chapter 1 . 10/29/2015
Why is my dear Ike portrayed in such a way? But this was, I dare say, a great one shot. I hope Ike does that to me . . . but it will be enjoyable ;) i hope Pit is ok :o

- snow . x . fairy
Lady Luna chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
Please continue this. Poor Pit! Make Ike pay for this! :'(
TearDropTiffy chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Please make this into a series. That's all I'm saying.
ChallengeFate chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Please make this into a series, this is great! I want to see Ike get his and more Hurt!Innocent!Pit
SleepyShuffle chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
This fic is haunting...but the amount of people who read it, myself included, shows just how curious we all are to read about the darkest sides of human nature ._. This is a late night review, got a bit deep there for a sec XD

But's very well written, I kinda wanted to stop reading as soon as he got his hands on Pits wings, but obviously curiosity and a morbid obsession prevailed cause I read it all...

Poor Pit did not deserve that... :c Bad, bad Ike! But powerful writing!
KarKitty chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Please! Please! For the love of all that is food and pure in this god forsaken world
ShikaTachidoriKitsuneHebiTaka chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
NO! why ike !
Arikari chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
awwwwwwwwwww, but i love pit AND ike, but in this ike is such a jerk!
Cet'lux chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
I call for REVENGE!

i loved the story and can't wait for more XD

Plx update soon
karin chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
ike is such a dickass

how dare he.

my poor angel needs his revenge.
margellyn chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
make a chapter 2 now
Gershwin4 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
:'D I absolutely love this! You're a great writer! Everything was clear, focused, and it flowed very smoothly. However, when you wrote that Ike was "Coming" on Pit, and junk, the way you spell that meanig of the word "Come", I've always spelt that type, "cumming" and "cum" so when I read it, I pronounced it in this really weird, British sounding, funky kind of voice. XD it sounded kinda funny. But forget about that, Awesome job. :)

And y'know what would be cool? If Pit told Peach or something what happened and Ike ends up trying to rape Peach too. :3
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