Reviews for Hatched
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 1/17
well with all those squats in his previous life i'm imagining him doing the mating dance.

lol the last line. nice fanfic.
guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2017
ahahahaha! ...chocobo! hahahaha! :-)
funny from the beginning to the end.
Zaraih chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
omg, this is wonderful XD
AteanaLenn chapter 1 . 6/11/2017
I was talking chocobos with some friends, and someone remembered this, and it made me want to re-read it, and I'd forgotten how much fun this was :D I love how Cloud is all 'Zack this all your fault!' and the thing with the triplets :DDD
UnLike Us chapter 1 . 1/31/2017
Nice twist. I also like the way you describe their chocobo habits.
Damien Grimm chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
The last part I just died laughing. This was a great read. Thanks for the laugh, it made my day.
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
This is unexpectedly hilarious and I love it!
MangoPeanutSituation chapter 1 . 2/5/2016
Would this count as a cruel and unusual punishment?

LOL
And a Wolf Dreams chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
LOL so funny! I wanna see the triplets again tho in another lifetime calling Cloud 'Mother'
zephyr hb chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
XD oh my god. unexpec4ed.
picabone99 chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
fabulous!
lovelycrazy chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Hehehehe...
Noradin chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Brilliant! :)
iloooveinuyasha1 chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Oh that's wonderful! That ending was the best.
*sigh* One-shots are the best and the worst sometimes. The hallmark of a good one-shot is a sense of completion but also a yearning for more. This was perfect. Thank you for writing it.
My Solitude chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
Funny story! It's pretty interesting. xD
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