Reviews for So Close
catfish17 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Really good!
I like how you described Ortiz's dream
The Wandering Fool chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I am so happy this fic exists.

Thank you so much for writing this.
austheke chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I. love. this.

I'm not sure you understand. I love this. I'm crazy for Kestrel/Ortiz, have been ever since reading the tantaraza scene, and this is a lovely, lovely representation of their relationship. To me, Ortiz is misguided, deluded, lost, but he believes in what he believes. He thinks that he's right, and in a way that makes him noble. And that's the sort of feeling I get from this fic. He's self-righteous, but in pursuit of something so honest that you can't help but sympathize.

I feel like I'm not making sense. : What I mean is: perfect. 3

Aus
Angel of Death chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
So sad, after all he doesn't really know her name at all and he was filled withhope but in the end threr never was time was there. Good job i congratulate you.
Prinzzez Kitten chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
*Cries* That was so sweet! I loved Marius! I wished he hadn't died! I wanted him to be with Kestrel! I loved this! You are great!

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luemsqiowes chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Man, this is great, cos I've always thought that it was unfair to kill Ortiz, after all, he was only doing what the Master told him. I really loved this.
QueenCleopatra chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Oh. In a way, I feel sorry for Ortiz. He had a good soul, but the Master's will was too strong. If he had not been the one who burned Kestrel's home, there might have been something. Alas, we will never know, because she is gone...

*sigh* William Nicholson is a genius.

Rebecca
AsanteSanaSquashBanana chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
This is really good! I never really appreciated how much ortiz loved kestrel...

Its sort of sad really...

and the irony is so thick you could choke on it...
Trish chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
E an Ortiz/Kestrel fic! I loved him in Slaves of the Mastery and I cried when he died, because I really thought he should have been with Kestrel. I also was looking for an Ortiz fic a few years ago and didn't find it :( So thanks for giving me what I've been looking for!
DarkMoonX chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Wow I loved this! I loved Ortiz in Slaves of the Mastery. I am always sad when I read about him dying. He's so innocent though he seems cruel. And reading this only brings out his soft side more, which is apparent in the book also. I would love to read more on this if you added anything else! It looks like a oneshot but you could definitely add to this! Great job on this! I loved it!