|Reviews for A Minor Form of Despair|
| kickassdani chapter 1 . 2/15
I really hope Allen was dreaming about Link
| xtake-me-awayx chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
omigod! lol that was like.. the perfect story that i've been trying to write for months!
| L's Hope chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
This story was all around awesome. Yes, I do feel abit like a pervert for reading it, but its uber-awesomeness overcomes that. Besides, it's a fairly natural and realistic situation. With Link being forced to watch Allen 24/7, you have to wonder about this kind of thing.
| Hesunohana chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
| snuffles5751212 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
aww! this was kinda cute )
poor link...no one can resist allen's cuteness XDD
| jarofclay42 chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Oh. My. Godd XD Everything that has an hot Allen in, can become the hottest thing in the world XD
Well, this is the first LinkxAllen I read, and whoa XD Help me!
Mmh, but..I was't sure, so I checked the other reviews but no one said it..so, it's only me or effectively 'that apprentice' is Lavi? Cause my english is not so good so I sometimes lose the thread XD Cause if it was..muhahaohoahoaho...*giggles more*
Anyways, good fic XD
| human circuitry chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
I'm sure this is 100% canon. Hahah, I love you for this. Link needs more love and attention, and you've written him so wel.
| DMFAZINA chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
that was pure awesome.
Link is such a voyer! omg...awesome seriously.
wow, i wanna write a linkxallen thing now LOL
it's realy well written too so descriptive and i love the yullen.
write another one! :D
| Thy Bird of Hermes chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
Bwahaha, that's great, thats so great. You should write something about them.
| azab chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
i loved it
| Keyte chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Dude. You have no idea how entertaining I found this. xDD;
I dunno, in the latest chapters, Link has really been evolving into quite a cool guy, and I'm starting to like reading about him more. And this was kind of like the icing on the cake. xDD I don't think I've ever seen anyone use an idea like this before, so this really made me smile. I dunno why, either, but I really like the way you write it. It's in his point-of-view but not first person, and it's even in present tense. You get props for using present tense correctly. I'm surprised, actually, 'cause when most people use present, they always switch between that and past, and it gets icky...
And I loved the way you referred to everyone by their last names throughout the whole thing. It just felt so in-character even though we haven't seen that much of Link yet, and that made me happy! So chyeah.
He.. Hooray for you. C:
| DragonDame57 chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
oh that was so cute.. i wish it would be updated this pairing is so interesting :D
and seeing Link fraustrated?
| Akky-chan chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
OHH! LINKY LOVE ALLEN!
*cougcough* sorry, ;
xD We ALL know that Allen's thinking about him, though xDD
It's great that this pairing's finally started to come out in fics and pictures! I havent loved a yaoi pairing like this one for a while 3
YAYS FOR YOUR FIC! 8D 3rd LinkAllen out there that I know of ;
| Elehdwena chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Wah a LinkXAllen one shot! wonderfull I totally imagine Link in this situation xD
I like how you write!
I hope this review make you happy _
-Sorry if my english is bad: I'm french-