Reviews for Pumpkin king and his KING?
KnightDevil chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Oh my! I really want to know what is going next please continue this fic.
hitokage195 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Er... Does Jack even have a tongue? XD sorry I just thought of it.
Hallow Eve chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
hm. Some spelling and grammer errors. And I don't think Jack would say 'kinda' in a million years but besides that well done.
Selinawen chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
yay! You've put this story on fanfiction _ Can't wait to see the next chapter _
Jenny chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
This was an interesting (and cute w) begining, I'd really like to see were you will be going with this, so please update soon.
mycarcrashheart chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
The plot sounds interesting, but the first chapter seemed like it was designed to show Jack and Sally's relationship, right?

I noticed that you kept switching between present and past tense a lot, which made it seem like flashback-type storytelling. There were also a few misspellings, but all in all it seems like an interesting premise. I'd like to see what you do with it!