Reviews for BeAuTy In ThE bReAkDoWn
rowan5255 chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
not bad on telling how she felt. not at all. Good one shot. 5/5
Abigail Fond chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Woh! :) I liked how you wrote that. Nice job!
Yoshipower321 chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
That was sweet! 3

I always felt touched when I'd beat Sora's part on Kingdom Hearts: CoM.

It would always be like:

*beats game as Sora*

*watches ending, and is a little touched by Naminé and Sora's words...*


*watches ending again*

I hope you write more~!
Marine is hope2 chapter 1 . 11/13/2008

I likie, though I am not a real fan of that pairing I still like it!

Joshious chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Nice. Descriptive.

A bit short, but are you adding chapters, or is this the end?

6/10 - *