Have Tsunade Namikaze did the same thing to Jiraiya Uchiha. That Sakura did to Naruto.

Sakura said “I guess our wrong doing towards Naruto.”

that's sound offensive I didn't mean it like that I thought I had written it in the comments i am so sorry

a bastard is a son of who the father isn't known of. so just yknow

really good story. One thing though, if naruto had "super sperm" then why didn't Sakura get pregnant? also, to bad it stopped when it was getting good.

Sakura decided to sneak into the sperm bank to get Naruto’s sperm to make it up to her ex-husband.

great story and good ending albeit a bit wordy at times you made naruto become a real word smith and quite philosophical compared to his old self, but thats pretty much par for the course you put him through.

if there was something to actually criticize it would be that you made naruto go 3 for 3 in the kids department, which is something you already noticed

and that you gave ino such a psychological handycap that she didnt just mount him to prove her feelings and let hinata do it while wallowing in self pity which was quite un-ino but again kind of par for the course even if you had 2 traumatized people land on the introverted side of it( trauma can cause focused on one self type of behaviour or focused on everyone but themselves type of behaviour had a (girl) friend that went through similar although worse as ino and ended up compensating by trying to mount everything that moved)

so not much to criticize realy since both of those are up for interpretation which is the authors most basic right.
thanks for putting it up here and letting me read it, i enjoyed it very much and i hope that you can continue writing since i selfish as i am would like to continue reading more of yours.

Honestly a really good idea with a fantastic execution. Your vocabulary is very good, it’s always great to read something that’s quite literate. And the story seems completed tbh, that could very well be a semi-open ending, so y’all don’t worry about being discontinued.

So he's gonna be annoying until she confesses? That's a bit pathetic... Even though it's supposed to be. He's supposed to be pathetic rn. But if there's one thing I hate most as a pet peeve, it's when someone repeats the same thing even after I have clearly understood what's been said. Even though I understand that Naruto ain't really getting it in the state of mind he's in. Listening to a broken record gets annoying and tiring...

Hinata having a child with Naruto like that aint great. The fact that they had sex was one thing. One thing that I could accept. Pregnancy is a whole other ball park though. That took me out a bit. Especially with Naruto not knowing about it and everything. That whole situation with them really sucks. But whatever I guess. That's just me sympathizing with this Naruto. Wishing the world for him to be a father only to find out this dude has a kid he doesn't even know about. Sucks that I have to know about it.

What a simp… of course send your bastard to my house

yea sharing his memories and invading them I know for story purposes, but still makes her terrible.

hinata isn't over him if she considered a marige with him just to make sure he wasn't alone. and saying so is just stupid

her keeping the kid from him is shitty so i don't think she should get him anyway.

Wow now i know why this fic has those tags. I hope Naruto goes on a rampage on these two.

Have Naruto’s kid hurt SasuSaku’s kid the same way that Sakura hurt Naruto.

Sakura sneak into the Sperm bank and steal Naruto’s sperm to try to make it up to Naruto. Sakura asked to go the waves country.

Great job on the fic. It was definitely worth the read.