Reviews for If I Should Die Before I Wake
billysbabe863 chapter 7 . 10/31/2010
Your story is amazing so far please keep writing. You should throw some drama/mystery in. then it would be perfect
strange sally chapter 12 . 9/17/2010
i wanna be honest i litrally feel lyke cryiinn consider ur self as duh bst est writer ever cause tuh me di issssssss just i cn t even describe it but yhhhh for duh sake of deadly madly insanly addidcted fan fic loversss do crry on x x x
strange sally chapter 12 . 9/17/2010
pleaseeeee carry on n do over chapters i really want to know what happens nexttt x xx plz plz plzzz lol its one of duh betsteest noels iv ever readdddd :):):): pretty please wiv a cherry on top x
strange sally chapter 8 . 9/14/2010
im deadly addicted to this novell lol itx just wowwwwwwwwwwww
strange sally chapter 5 . 9/13/2010
i might have reaad it late bt still i have to sayy dis chapterr was much more than amazing this was beyound words could explain lovvedd ittt :):):)): keep it up
strange sally chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
Oh my god im in love with this novel keep up the good work -2010 lol
ZombieJanchii chapter 12 . 7/25/2010
Write more this story was amazing, You should write alot more to this story. It was amazing,Fantastic,and loved it.
janice chapter 12 . 7/23/2010
Wow this story was Amazing. Keep writting. Please i got so into the story . I hope you write more and more, really enjoying this story, But i would like to know more about her family and if there alive or so. And what happens with blake and Cara. Write as soon as possible -Janice
Coupar chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Okay, try not to get PO'd about my review. Most people can't take negative comments. Try and take it like a strong, and honorable person.

I enjoyed this story up until the point where you write: " I never saw myself as very attractive. Then again, I never really looked in the mirror at all. I never really pictured myself as anything. I then turned around and noticed a body length mirror. I walked up closer, touching the cool surface. I looked into my own eyes and was startled by what I saw. My eyes were red and puffy but still held beauty."

That is the point where I realized that this story would probably suck. I gave up after a few more paragraphs.

Your main character is a Mary Sue. The whole 'my-parents-are-dead-and-I'm-the-responsible-one" is very overused.

But, I did like the very beginning, it was nice. I wish you would have stretched the romance out, rather than start it off right away.
Kiya serrano chapter 2 . 1/29/2010
Publish it, then take the critical advice from your publisher, and use it to your advantage. Crop the story, add detail to certain parts, and it will turn out amazing. I'd buy it.
Jana chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
This story is very good. You are an amazing writer but I think that you started too many sentences with

I. I stopped. I ran. I flew. I went to change. Also I know that this is just the beginning but your character

and Blake fell in love a little too fast. Although I suppose it could have been love at first sight, after the second day you guys are already saying that you love eachother and that's not very realistic in my opinion

another minor flaw is that twilight is a very amazing and popular book and I know that evryone strives to be just like Stephanie in their writing and you are kinda pushing it. It seems kinda he same as it in a way. For example the gold flecked eyes and cold hands and hands in his hair. Not being mean or anything just some construcive advice cuz I would love for someone to be honest with me about mine so yeah...other than those few things, it's great so keep at it
Dragongrl937 chapter 11 . 11/13/2009
I can't belive that some people can actually write this good! I usually wouldn't like something like this at all but you are a really good writer and this story has a good plot. When will you write more! I can't wait for the next chapter! When will you update? I hope it's soon I want to know what happens! Update soon before I go mad with anticipation!
CheshireTears chapter 11 . 9/20/2009
UPDATE SON!

Alice-chan
CheshireTears chapter 5 . 9/19/2009
I love this story! Sorry I haven't reviewed before, I just started reading and had to download it to my MP3 to read the rest. I just have one question: how does this fit into the Certain Slant of Light category? Love it, please update soon!

Alice-chan
Believe-Your-Imagination chapter 10 . 8/3/2009
wow this is great story!

i kept me interested the whole time

im glade i get 2 read it

plz continue writing
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