|Reviews for In This Memory|
| SilverLiningSheep chapter 18 . 3/17
I am out of breath from reading this and my eyes are wet. You write tragedies SO well! After each event, my heart sunk deeper and deeper and my eyes continued to widen. This is the most saddest Suite Life fanfic out there and I couldn't believe all the deaths. Everytime the story wasn't in deep despair, I feared for who was next. I kept going "no, not -insertnamehere-! It can't be them next!" I couldn't imagine if I were Zack and these events happened to me. Maddie's shocked me but by then I was numbed. Cody's was too brutal and that one hit me extremely hard, especially the dialogue between the twins and Zack's nightmare. You have a way with words an dialogue. I couldn't believe it, oh my god.
At the beginning, I couldn't imagine what could drive Zack over the edge like that but now I know why. The talk with Mr. Moseby and Zack was really heartwarming and I was hoping Zack would change his mind but sadly he didn't.
I am sad that Maddie's death was kinda quick. I know that sounds messed up but I was sad Zack kinda moved on from it so quick. I know she wasn't as important as Zack's actual family though so I understand.
The scene with Mr. Moseby listening to the answering machine made me literally open my eyes wide and swear out loud. I was devastated when Zack was dead but Cody managed to make it because Zack would have been there if he knew. So obviously you had me fooled! Thanks for making them live.
Kudos and I am sooooo in love with this story! I'm gonna have feels all day at work now haha.
| Jacquien Esmerelda chapter 18 . 8/12/2014
Omg that made my cry! It was so sad then it got happy! I love it! They all got their happily ever after
| steffiegee chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
omg :'( when i read the part about the plan crash, i was listening to Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata. i literally cried during that part, not only because of what i was reading, but also because of the song! read that part when the characters are watching the tv and the wreckage is being described..and even the explosion part..listen to that song - a little over 2 minutes into it - as you read that part. (that part has a woman singing like an angel would - light, high, and airy)...it will seriously make you cry D':
| SerialAuthor chapter 18 . 9/21/2010
So, this was totally beautiful. And sad. Love the was you write. Don't stop.
| Waldojeffers chapter 17 . 4/23/2010
Well, I've read this for the GFAs where this one got nominated too. Tiger already warned me this would be a very sad story, and he kind of spoilered Cody would survive. Knowing that, I feel a bit stupid now, cause I still fell for it. I really believed Cody was dead, and that Zack died for that matter. Can't even begin to express how relieved I was to see they both survived
Anyhow this was a very good story. Very sad too... Once again I cried with a story. It's becoming a habit of me to cry with stories here. But that usually means they're great. And so was this tragedy. I can't believe all the twins had gone through. How much bad luck can you have? No wonder Zack was feeling that depressed.
Great story once again, Kulmanari. I'm glad I decided to read it after all. But I'd be more happy with a less sad story t be honest. :)
| owlhero chapter 11 . 4/8/2010
Beautiful Song by the way. I going to download to my Ipod. You can cruel, can it. Ripping a part a person's life, like that? Not a insult. I am just saying its amazing how much a human being can take and burn until we reach the limit and dont care about life anymore. We are such complicated and mixed lifeforms, are we
| woundedhearts chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
I love these stories, they're very well written and I enjoyed reading them immensely. I have to say I didn't see this ending coming, but I am so glad it did. I could finally put away that box of tissues I'd been using...keep writing, I will keep reading.
| o3.dts chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
| o3.dts chapter 14 . 5/18/2009
aw . :(
| tiger002 chapter 18 . 5/16/2009
I was surprised to see an update for this, I had thought that you would be out in what ever place you are going. A good chapter and it should be good to see what new details you add to this story. I like his description of the different emotions. If I found out that I would be a father, I would likely just panic, but I like how his logic combines with emotions for the effect. Great chapter and story and see ya in june.
| KirkTrekkin chapter 18 . 5/16/2009
ok i was so not expecting that chapter but im glad you added it. when i saw another chapter, i didnt actually believe it was there. i thought it was over and im so happy you added this chapter. i loved it so much. it was so nice between cody and barbara. im just so happy that you added this.
| Wyntirsno chapter 18 . 5/16/2009
That was a good chapter, it fit really well with the rest of the story. I like how you made Cody so calm and confident in this story. He was Zack's rock during his hard emotional struggle, I guess he was Barbara's rock too. Once again that was a great story.
| Kulmanari chapter 17 . 5/16/2009
I didn't include Zack's wife because she didn't have a significant role in the Epilogue and didn't want to make her character who would have no lines or important actions. I was more concerned with Zack/Cody being together again and building Adam and Kurt's characters since I may use them in a later story with Zack's kids possibly playing some roles too.
| hayylies chapter 17 . 5/14/2009
very nice, but im curious who's is the mother of zack's kids?
| KirkTrekkin chapter 17 . 5/10/2009
that was so great. the epilogue finished it off nicely. i love how zack and cody both had two boys and one girl. it was sweet. its great that zack healed. i hoped he would. this story is one of my favs and i cant wait to read another story and i dont mind waiting for a month. ive waited for a year for a chapter to be posted once. you did a really awesome job on the story and i hope more of your stories will be just as good.