|Reviews for Though the Leaves Fall the Tree Remains|
| montypython203 chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
Wow this sounds really interesting! You established the mood well, and that was a great little cliffie, just like in a real ep.
| Otter Child chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
good characterization, you nailed Nine's speech patterns. And the fact that he's always missing his target time and place(think that'd get annoying?) And good foreshadowing. Will there be more of this?I like it.
There are a few typos that I noted. The sentence about people who died because of him needs a bit of rewording, and you need a few more commas. A lot of times you use the word 'and' when a comma would have been better. Very nice anyway, though.
| loveislouder94 chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Sweet and well written.