Reviews for Waiting for Springtime
Guest chapter 9 . 3/24
well written with a lot of introspection on the part of the characters. it felt very realistic and insightful in terms of how grief works and their romance progressed at a nice pace. it was very sweet and descriptive and you kept it romantic without even throwing in any lemon. the length was also enjoyable as I often read through my fics too quickly so I was pleased with the long chapters. thanks for doing such a great job
Guest chapter 9 . 3/31/2012
Wow, this was such an emotional ride, I haven't read a yuffentine quite like this before. It was kind of weird seeing Yuffie as a married woman but you kept her as /her/ despite everything that happened and mopey Vincent was oddly adorable. Poor guy never gets the girl!

I was happy when they got together though and I have a special love for daddy!Vincent. I really enjoyed reading this and I'm gonna check out your other fics now.
damagectrl.07 chapter 9 . 1/30/2012
This story is beautiful. This is the first fic that ever made me cry. I usually don't cry when I read but I became so emotional at the beginning of Chapter 3. /3 Poor Yuffie. I get so attached to characters and it hurts seeing them in pain.

Again, this was a brilliant Yuffentine fic. Good job on this one. :)
Anon chapter 9 . 4/1/2011
You've kept me up past three dammit! Seriously write more yuffentine. Soooo good!
anon chapter 9 . 2/9/2011
I hardly ever read anything that makes me want to cry but this did in places. You really captured how it feels to grieve and how hard it is to move on- but you broke it up with enough humour and sweet moments to stop it from being too sad. I also really liked the slow burn of Vincent and Yuffie's relationship. It's actually quite nice to see him pine after her for a change. I really enjoyed reading your fic.
Amaurea6 chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
Um, it's complete, so I know this review is irrelevant.

You need to work on transitioning from time and place to time and place in your chapters, and VV is a tad OOC, but nothing serious. Umm... your idea of falling in love is a bit odd too, and it doesn't quite translate to "paper" well, but w/e.

I will keep reading. Overall though, it's not bad.
xxfatal chapter 7 . 12/26/2010
The way your handled Vincent's little declaration was just amazing. Mentally encouraging the poor guy to carry on, and stifling laughter at his "cherry" comment, and good gracious, Yuffie's reaction was just so realistic, considering the circumstances.

I read through the entire story, but I thought I'd review on this particular chapter, since I loved it so much!

Thank you for writing this wonderful piece. :)
Sepsis chapter 9 . 10/14/2010
Already the last chapter? ._.

But I have to say, I just love the image of Yuffie and Vincent as parents!

“Besides, it made Vincent happy. Yuffie had come to realise that there wasn't a lot she wouldn't do to achieve that.” Yuffie Valentine sounds really cool, too. Okay, I just love the name Valentine itself, its just too cool! xD And the thing that their country had to accept their love because Vincent can looks scary..xD Thats so true! “He would come to meetings if she needed him to glare at someone for her, though. He was the most potent weapon in her political arsenal.” I was laughing so hard at this part! xD

Theyre just so good with each other! And you wrote it perfectly. (“arguing with Vincent had got a lot more stimulating (and occasionally amusing) now that she didn't have to respect his personal space.” xD) Im really happy that you wrote this story and that I found it!_ I honestly dont know that much about final fantasy (and Im ashamed of that! xD) but I could understand everything and I definitely enjoyed everything! So thank you, your story was great! (:
Sepsis chapter 8 . 10/14/2010
“The simple fact that he could touch her like that filled him with a fierce, warm emotion that he supposed must be happiness.” I totally awww-ed here so

"Do you remember when I stole all of Cid's cigarettes and replaced them with those candy ones?" xDD Im happy that they at least had some time together.. :3 But I dont think that the council will like their new relationship.:/

Lord Fuzzingtons? xD seriously? xDD I love you, Yuffie! And Vincent really had to say that, thats too awesome..

And here was their first fight as a couple? :3 At least it wasnt a really big fight and they talked about it. (That was so sweeeeet!x333)

“He saw Wutai as home because Yuffie was there.” And the whole end..oh my god..x333 You know how to make me happy..xD
Sepsis chapter 7 . 10/14/2010
“She could have thrown herself back into the river for that stupid comment” xDDD

And..oh my god. ._. He said it! He really did! Here I was, thinking that he just says, aw, sorry, I didnt mean it and everything. I think I read too much stories where that happened. xD But Im really glad that you didnt do that and that they talked about it. Though it was really short... Aww, but I can understand them both! Vincent is slightly hurt and thinks she doesnt want him and Yuffie is just confused and still thinks of Kito. Argh!

“If there was anyone on the Planet who deserved someone to love them back without hesitation, it was Vincent Valentine.” ._. Thats so right..x33

“the one time Reno had tried to cheer her up by flirting with her she had practically strangled him to death with his own ponytail” xDD I already said that I think YuffiexReno is interesting, too, but I love the image I have in my head now. xD His own ponytail..But back to the chapter. xD I really liked it how you wrote about Yuffies thoughts and feelings again. (because youre totally right, stuff like that IS important and even better when its written that good!) She wasnt..head over heels (I hope thats ) for him, she thought good about it and then she saw what she feels or can feel for him. (: Great! I loved the end! (And everything else of course!) Perfect!
Sepsis chapter 6 . 10/14/2010
Im glad Vincent asked her how she can live her life “normal” again. (:

But it made me so angry when I read that Yuffie should marry again. I hate it so much when people really think that a woman has to marry to do something or to get pregnant or anything like that! Nobody would really want that from a man. :/ Hmnm..Sorry, I always get upset when its about this subject. xD But it really annoys me so much! Even if she is the lady or the heir in one country... Okay, Im going to shut up now. xD Yuffie is a little princess, so of course she has her duties and everything.._

“The person he most wanted to see after being injured, but least expected to be there, was curled up asleep in a chair at the side of his bed.” Who doesnt love to read that? xD Thats so cute!. And oh god, that Yuffie is so sad because she doesnt want anyone else to die..:,/.

” but if he could make her happy in any way, he would gladly try for the rest of his life.” Aww..;D And its so good to see that Yuffie sees Vincent different now. Oh, did I already mention that I loved the end? He kissed her! I really have a fangirl-moment right now!_
Sepsis chapter 5 . 10/13/2010
I think I repeat myself but I have to tell you again: I loved this chapter! Everything! Youre so good at writing! I nearly cried again when I read how Yuffie feels sometimes or how her friends try to comfort her. "Most of the time, she knew that it was stupid and dangerous to think like that, but sometimes when she was alone, exhausted from a lack of sleep and from crying, these thoughts would haunt her until morning." Something like that! Aww, youre too awesome or Im just too tired to stop my eyes from tearing..xD (Im not even sure if this is a word in english? xD) But its probably both..

"I may have said something along the lines of 'get over yourself, you great big loser,' but at least that was original!" xD Thats so like Yuffie! And the chess-game and the end with the stars and the constellations. xD Great!

I cant wait to read more when I wake up again..
Sepsis chapter 4 . 10/13/2010
oh my god..I nearly cried whe you wrote about Kitos burial and everything,. How Yuffie feels... That was so sad and you wrote it so good...

"There would be time to talk her out of that plan later, but right then, she needed his support and his protection." Im so glad that she has her friends and that Vincent stayed with her. And of course that she begins to be more like the Yuffie we all know. :)

""Gawd, we're such losers.""Speak for yourself," he retorted, not able to prevent his smirk when she actually laughed for the first time since he'd arrived in Wutai." xDD I loved these parts.
Sepsis chapter 3 . 10/13/2010
Aw, now I really feel bad that I felt a bit happier as I read he was shot.. :/ He made Yuffie so happy... It was good to read her thoughts and what happened to her but now Im really sad that something happened to Kito...
Sepsis chapter 2 . 10/13/2010
I loved it!x3 Vincents thoughts, that he wants her to be happy and that he really is a good friend to her! Aw, there was so much more in this chapter I loved but Im not good at remembering everything. xD

"He couldn't help smiling, especially when Reeve choked on his drink. "You can't poach my employees right in front of me!" he protested." God, that part was awesome!

And here I was just hoping that Yuffie wont get pregnant (hoenstly I dont like pregnant-stuff in most of the stories Im reading, I dont even really know why..) and then the end.? ._. Kito was a really cute guy and everything. And he made Yuffie happy. But still Im not that sad that something like this happenend.." Aw, I feel bad now. xD And I dont even know if hes really dead or just hurt..? Yuffie will be really sad now, I cant wait to read the next chapter when I have more time. :)
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