Reviews for For Better or Worse
WhistlingWolf chapter 17 . 6/30/2016
3 I truly loved this! I am going to favorite this, and then proceed to read ALL OF YOUR OTHER FICS.
I would have loved what happened afterwards.. how they would fix everything, how everything would work out. However, I am also quite satisfied how it has turned out up till now
Yay chapter 17 . 11/3/2015
This story was one of the best I have read keep it up!
Great. but chapter 12 . 11/3/2015
Does anybody else see the kinda big mistake with this chapter? It says he stabbed the shade between the EYES and killed him. It's a well known fact in the book that you have to stab a shade through the heart to kill it. But this fan fic is so good I'm going to let it pass. Every one makes mistakes and it's perfectly fine. Keep up the great work ;)
aglaja73 chapter 17 . 5/7/2015
I don't know if you still read your reviews but I've just finished to read your story and I want to thank you very very much for it. It's so amazing, wonderful, it's really one of my favourite stories because on one hand I have totally lost my heart to Murtagh since I've read the books and on the other hand I love the idea of Eragon and Murtagh pairing and the way you told it or its development is so... I don't have words for it. Great. Otherwise I'm very sad because now I have finished. I think I'll read it again :-) The only thing I've asked myself... Would they managed it? Would they find a way to live their love? Would they find a way to fight against Galbatorix together? I strongly belief so!
Sammirae chapter 17 . 10/5/2014
I almost died inside from this last chapter. I thought it was really going to happen, like they weren't going to talk about it with him first and were just going to send him back. My heart was aching and I was like NOOOOO! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO MEEEEE! And then it didn't happen, and I had my hand over my heart, breathing heavy like I just avoided getting hit by a car. I was ready to cry if it happened. It was very mean of you, but it closed everything so nicely and gave it a great feeling of closure. The last chapter ended with a better feeling of closure, in my opinion, for their relationship, but this one really helped close off the story as a whole. Marvelous read.
Deotail chapter 17 . 5/23/2014
I don't know if authors check old completed stories, but I felt obligated to review. You did an amazing job! I could tell from your style of writing, plot management, and characterization that you were a brilliant writer pretty much from the first chapter, and my respect only grew along the way. One thing in particular I have to applaud you for is the way your tone imitated Paolini's own. It's not common I get that vibe, despite the hundreds of flics I have read, and I loved feeling like I was reading an actual addition to the inheritance series. I adored both your Eragon and your Murtagh, and your take on Aria as well. If you indeed read this review, know that one more has had their heart and mind truly enthralled by your writing. I sincerely thank you!
pinkmafia24 chapter 17 . 10/17/2013
This was so cute and completely made my week ijust wanted to say thank you
fingers-falling-upwards chapter 17 . 8/28/2013
You are entirely brilliant, my dear. Thank you so much for this story!
Rascal chapter 6 . 8/17/2013
This Arya...
I began to wish her misfortunes(I'll call it that) after the first encounter.
Now Can she not DIE. A long and bloody one. Like getting run over by a cactus. Or pecked to death by a chicken of doom. Or a single ravenous piranha devouring her bite by bite. That sounds good right at the end of chapter 6. SCREW YOU ARYA.
Glorilian chapter 17 . 3/31/2013
This story is so so amazing, beautiful, well-written.
It's one of the best stories (that takes place in Alagaesia) that I have ever read and... well, in my opinion... so far it IS the best I've read with EragonMurtagh as pairing. The character development of Murtagh is wonderful, interesting... and very realistically written.

I really enjoyed reading your story... Thnx for sharing it! :-)
Checkyourmetrics chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
You are an amazingly talented author. You've put Paolini to shame here my friend.

I stayed up till five in the morning to finish this series. Read up to the last chapter in one night. Glowing praise.

I would sincerely like to communicate my desire for a sequel. If you ever feel you have it in you please do! You've gained a loyal follower.

Bravo and Encore!
DestinyAnimeLover18 chapter 17 . 6/21/2012
T.T that. Was. Beautiful. I'll admit I was a little worried at the end there... But that was a very cute ending! I loved the story!
Threadbare Threnody chapter 17 . 6/2/2012
Thanks, it was great!
DeliriousDuck17 chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
I love this story! This is my second time reading it (can't believe i didn't review the first time). Amazing job. Really, and their characterizations are perfect. Thanks for writing this awesome story.

Winter Cicada chapter 6 . 12/16/2011
bwah! sad chapter ending! D:

lol, murtagh's soft side...
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