Well done. I like Ellie being in the loop - makes sense the way you did it. Lots of possibilities. Write more soon!

Awesome story! Great revelation with excellent dialogue that kept the characters in line with the show. I'm sad to see that this story is complete, maybe she could join them on a mission or something!

I liked this a lot. Good, effective writing, and solid, if standard, characterizations-and there's nothing wrong with not deviating from the standard. Does it go beyond the parameters of the series? Heck yes it does, but that's the point of fanfic.

Now, do us all a favor, and WRITE MORE CHUCK. Do it. Do it nao.

4*/5*

Thanks for writing; I loved the story. I especially liked the conversation between Sarah and Ellie and how Sarah explained that Chuck was her will's beneficiary and how it was all the components of a civil union. Nice touch.

I now wonder when and If Ellie and/or Devon will find out the truth about Chuck on the show. This was a very interesting story. It's as simple as walking in and seeing Chuck injured. Chuck seriously needs to consider getting his own apartment, lol...he can do it on 12.50 an hour! he'll just have to get a basement! Doh! Your Ellie took this very well, but after she's had her moments, she is pretty rational. It is a good idea to have a doctor on board, she can always patch things up for the whole team, but it makes for interesting plots. I like Casey's grumbling about 'another Bartowski.' I bet he's furious! LOL. It can get pretty dangerous for her in the long run. Good job on this.

Really nice characterizations. Keep writing! ;-)

I am really loving this start! Sounds like it will be a very interesting story to read. The way you brought Ellie into the mix was awesome, and the bit about Chuck being in charge of Sarah's legal matters was a nice touch. Though I would have liked to see more of a sentimental exchange between Sarah and Ellie, I'm glad that Ellie did get the notion of just how deeply Sarah feels for Chuck. Can't wait to read more!

Nice job on providing us a pov where Ellie finds out. I loved the beneficary thing.

Wow. I really liked this. Loved the characterization of Sarah and Ellie. Really love it when the former has an edge, like she does here. I think it's a shame this is a one-shot. Any rate, hope to see you write more Chuck fic soon. Especially if it's this quality.

Very good story. I really thing you should turn this into a multi-chapter story. )

Great story! Please update soon!

Loved the story, more please. Having Ellie, know at least some of the storu opens up some interesting possibilities.

Really enjoying this! Please update soon.

O very nice fic to wake up to in the morning! Well done :) Love the interactions between Chuck and Sarah. Hope you write more soon- way more lol