Reviews for The Broken Series
Cat Yuy chapter 3 . 5/3/2009
I love all three of these.

Can't wait to see more from you.
Seph Meadowes chapter 3 . 5/1/2009
Heart-breaking...no pun intended.
Elley Winchester chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
That was great. I love the first one, and I love this one. You portray them so well!
I Hear The Acid's lovely chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
that is the cutest ending! you should totally follow it up! like i'm just sitting here thinking up of what their reunion will be like! i loves it
balletflats chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
I've just read "You're Broken" and this, and I can honestly say you break my heart in two. This entire sequence broke me:

"Elle got up and began to walk towards the door. “Gabriel, if you ever see me again, tell me about us. I’m going back to my Daddy and he’s probably going to make me forget. He’s going to break my brain and put it back together with scotch tape.”

His head was resting on his blood-covered hands, but he lifted his head to look at her. It left a line of blood across his forehead.

She finished, “Come back to me and I’ll bring back Gabriel. I promise.”"

A third part? *nudge*
lost in pale blue chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Depressing!
ame chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
keep going
a.sam chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
OH! Good story!

I about cried Monday night watching them. It was totally devastating, but this obviously answers the whole future mother of Gabriel's son question. Shame, they work so well together.
BloomingSparrow chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
Loved it...but really sad!
Cat Yuy chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
I loved this story and this line was my favorite.

"He’s going to break my brain and put it back together with scotch tape.”