|Reviews for Blythe's Story|
| Tripple-A-Plus chapter 4 . 11/21/2008
This chapter is so sweet. Thank you for this wonderful update.
| i luv ewansmile chapter 4 . 11/21/2008
Ahah. Aww. Fabulous story! Very suspenceful! And intriguing.
| Queen S of Randomness 016 chapter 4 . 11/21/2008
haha. cute moment at the end with the 3 of them playing with the army men (i mean...marine men)
another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! - :)
| Queen S of Randomness 016 chapter 3 . 11/20/2008
awesome story so far! i hope u update soon! - :)
| notlupus chapter 3 . 11/20/2008
Personally I prefer Phil. :)
| fox4mel chapter 3 . 11/20/2008
This is a side of John I'd never imagined - he seems so content and happy to be a father.
It's amazing how much that one night has already influenced Blythe's life - no doubt it will hang over her forever.
Despite her calm front, you can tell she's always a little ill at ease underneath, as you said, "looking for signs that would betray her."
I can't believe Blythe remained so composed when Phil showed up unannounced - I think I would have had a heart attack!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Tripple-A-Plus chapter 3 . 11/20/2008
I really like this story. Thank you for the update.
| fox4mel chapter 2 . 11/18/2008
I can just feel Blythe's anxiety as I read this - you did a great job writing her character.
I can't imagine how hard it must have been to carry the baby two weeks past her due date and pretend like nothing was wrong.
This is making me wonder what kind of father John would have been if he had never known the truth...would Greg be any different?
I think that
| 08joanna chapter 2 . 11/17/2008
Still loving this. Since you have Blythe wondering from his birth whether or not Greg is John's son (but not entirely sure herself), I wonder how this could've affected her relationships with her son and husband. Maybe she stayed silent about the abuse because she always felt guilty about the uncertain paternity and felt she needed to somehow make it up to John.
| socrgrl14 chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
I'd like to find out what happens. Please post more. I want to know what happens when John sees the baby.
| 08joanna chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Great idea. I'd love to know more about "Phil" of course, but I'm sure whatever you've got planned for future chapters will be interested. Can't wait for more.