Reviews for Unfinished Business
Marie chapter 2 . 2/12
Grissom was probably far too gone to ever find his way back!
Marie chapter 1 . 2/12
That Heather woman got Grissom both times when he was utterly in the lowest of the low. Not sure what kind of mumbo-jumbo she'd used on Sara.
CSI-babe1 chapter 2 . 2/13/2009
good start
El Gringo Loco chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
An intriguing first chapter that has serious potential in many directions. My own preference would be something other than a straight GSR in which they live happily ever after. But that is the author's decision. I look forward to seeing what they do with it.
She'sAShipper chapter 2 . 11/15/2008
Great story.
NickyStokes72 chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
I think this could show some heavy promise as long as Sara doesn't beat the crap out of Heather when she opens the door. I think Heather, being able to analyze things would realize that when she was at her lowest, Grissom was there in friend only level and in return, knowing how many times she asked about Sara, I honestly don't think Heather would have taken advantage of him at his lowest.
Judy kirsten chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Great. Hope your next chapter is soon
LittleSpooky chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
I'll follow to see where it goes :)